Secret Agent Entry: Pappy Onwuagbu

#6

yea I’m kind of confused on the backround as to where she’s at. but it looks cool so far. I think the more the story is fleshed out the better it’s going to be.

#7

did a couple of rough sketches for my background and finally i decided to go with this one i think ill leave the guard out. its about time to start the real thing.

#8

Hello Pappy!! Your latest one is looking great. Maybe if you offset the cam/pov towards the left and place the guard on the left hand side (I think the guard will add to your composition). Anyway… keep it up.

#9

Look nice but I can’t understand the all scene. Doesn’t matter, I will keep a eye for the next sketch. :wink:

#10

thanks man. the enviroment is meant to be some sort of misile launch station on sea. i definitely need to work on me composition. thanks for the feed back!

#11

Has a nice ‘Modesty Blaise’ feel to it already Pappy. I like the way her pose is going and the guy slumped behind her.

#12

just a more refined version of one of me previous concepts. i think ill make the missile bigger.

#13

hey guys! been working on a new idea which i feel is working better.at the moment im working on the composition and the waiter will be in the foreground. dont worry guys its ketchup. all crits are welcome. Peace

#14

Looks like an ambtous and complicated scene Pappy. Bet you’ll pull it off beautifully. Look forward to watching it progress.

#15

thanks! ill do my best

#16

hey guys! just another WIP.

#17

hey guys! thought id do a quick speed paint to see how things could go

#18

Coming on really well Pappy. Nice outdoorsy palette keeping it nice and fresh too.

#19

Looking good pappy!! Just to let you know, the perspective of your buildings and tables is a bit off. Keep them coming!!

#20

just a WIP ive been working on. all CC’s are welcome

#21

Thanks Nickillus!
Hey Michor, thatnks for the tip it will be sorted.

#22

Hey! I love the scene! You may want to switch his shoe laces, though, so the foot that’s down is stepping on the lace of the one that’s up. I’ve tripped plenty of times, I know a bit about how it works. : ) I love the reaction of the agents, and am looking forward to your updates!

#23

hey guys! just a wip. its not much. all CCs are welcome.

#24

great style great character the background perspective is not correct.greatwork!

#25

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