Secret Agent Entry: Mohammad Ali Shakeri

#41

Composition crit: I think that more space is needed above the girl’s head. Try to zoom out a bit…or move the camera up. See if it looks better…

#42

Thanks to Norbert, i just give more room to the girl

next i will work on characters model, and textures

#43

hi ali,nice thread…keep going and good luck

#44

Hey it looks really good, it is all coming together nicely. I agree with nfuchs it definitely needed some space above her head.

#45

This is quite an interesting scene. I look forward to the finished product. Bonne chance!

#46

coochaki - thanks mohammad, you too

iskanderMellakh - thanks dude, on the last update i gave more space above the girl head, but by trying to zoom out or moving up the camera i will lose other things, it’s a bit tricky but i will try my best for some free space above her head on the final composite

vmulligan - thanks, wish i don’t disappoint you

#47

long time no update and at last update with this crap, sorry about that

will upload something more complete next time

#48

actually this is a LOT shit

i should really practice,I SHOULD PRACTICE

#49

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