I think your character is too stiff. The body doesn’t move at all. I think you should spend more time on the body motion (back, legs etc)
Here is good reference
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xRn0EXsrIrA
Secret Agent Entry: Carlos Eduardo Montoya Cortes
pierzak, ivanisavich: Thanks guys for the advice and i will fixit!..the thing is that i animated that character with a friend mocap, i recorded him and he moves like that…so stiff. But yes, that can be improved.
Thanks again!
Software: 3ds max,After Effects,mental ray,Photoshop
I have just finished my video.
And the story is it:
Tom is just a regular condecored cop, with girlfirend and some friends, and every morning he wakes up he just make some excercises, to be atheltic…but he hides a secret job, nobody knows but tom is a secret agent, and when the phone rings, he is ready for action.
This idea was from Chuck the tv series and the bourne trilogy.
I just had 2 weeks of full rendering and post-production and just finished, I’m happy with the results…I was lucky for the time extended, so I can finish.
Hope you like it and good luck for all.
Feels like the morning routine scenes of the 2 Will Smith movies, I Am Legend and I, Robot.
secret agents are just like you and me! They get up, work out shower drink water, and go to work! hah. I like the camera work albeit subtle shots. You finished just like your story boards, good job!
Definitely in there with the I-Robot reference with the shower scene, my GF loves that film, and that scene, pah! lol 
like the anim dude, the character animations could be tweaked further, but other than that, pretty sweet. well done.
good luck!
sknne77, mcnooj82: Yeah you are right…i based that escene in those movies…is a great shot shot
destruct007: thats what a secret agent means…he needs no look like a regular person.
Thanks guys for the kind comments!
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