For this theme, yes, I’m going with a cartoony style.
I was thinking of a more serious look at the time,more of the undercover aspect/bladerunner, probably having no more than two people in the scene, but I went with a cartoony style, just to see how it would go.
I wanted to make it feel like the idea was taken out of a page of a comic book, and to turn the scene more into a james bond meets TrueLies in the final hours of a movie.
With a suttle influence of Venture Brothers, Cowboy Bebop,even a little X-files. Indeed it was just for fun.
As for the composition itself it kind of just evolved.To have so many things happening in such a short proximity would give the piece alot to see,yet balancing and having too much or not enough to catch the eye,is one of my main concerns for this piece at the time.
In a way I could probably do a couple things,either reposition some of the enemies further away from the characters, expand the space, reduce the amount foreground to see more of the background, or just delete some people, which I have no problem doing.
Comments are great, and do play a strong role in creating an effective presentation. I’ve been staring at this work for a while, so it good to have people see what I haven’t noticed.
Thank you for the comments if you have anymore feedback or know anybody as well feel free, I’ll continue to evolve this piece until the deadline.
I’m sure people know this, but is it possible to submit more than one compostion. I would love to show the reversal of this type of compostion as well. One at a time though, one at a time.
Looking forward for more updates! Cheers!! 