Scene: March of Dead


#1

Hello everyone -
I´ve made a little changes of pic -wich I¨ve already posted in
2d finished , and now i think , It would be better to post it in this Evocative forum -because i think that this evokes something?don´t you think?..
hope you don´t mind it…

Iam still not sure about the rain?any suggestions?..thx:)


#2

Wow, this is great.
For the rain, I think you should make the rain drops look less parallel. Nature is rarely that straight.
regards
-IS-


#3

it sure is an intimidating mood,
i wouldn’t like to come across ths guy,
not even in my dreams ;0]
ok, about the rain, i have to agree,
that it is indeed a cool element into the all,
but i wounder how it would be like to have it
more transparent and irregular.


#4

well i certainly cant look at that for more then 5 seconds, great work!

‘the task of an artist to to make the human being uncomfortable’ Lucian Freud

feel proud :slight_smile:

tim


#5

Did you try a version with woth eyes open and staring at the viewer? … I may or may not have more impact, but if you havn’t tried then you owe it to yourself to look at the alternative.


#6

…well,thx very much for yours opinions -I´ll surely try it!


#7

since this is the evocative forum, I won’t get into technical aspects that I think could be touched on, but do think if you added more detail into the forehead area and especially make the eye more realistic, looks very small right now and the shadding on it isn’t doing justice, it would be much more dramatic to the viewer.


#8

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