Scene: inspired by Half Life 2

#21

I like what you have done so far, add a little more rust on the ladder espicilly the upper part of the ladder.

#22

Much nicer! well done, looking really good now. I even like it with no sky, seems more ‘half lifey’,

Try adding in some wooden creates like there was, or oil drums. Only a few though, don’t want to make it too cramped in.

#23

just…WOW… it’s great :thumbsup:

#24

when I said half life, I ment, industry, oil rigs, electric grid lines, HALF LIFE ART !!! This is a wip :slight_smile:

#25

That looks like Half Life art to me! :slight_smile:

Reminds me of several levels in the game.

I still think your water is to dark and solid, but like they say it’s art.

#26

Add some good old rubbish! :smiley:

Love the progress your making! Very HL2 like work.

#27

Hi, Critical. Amazing work you got here. I’ll give it five stars just becaouse of that nice lightning that you have. The overall picture is really great but I would remove those wires around the pool , I believe it would be nicer to the eye to concentrate on big picture and not on the details. Good job, thought

#28

fixed some stuff, fixed the fence texture, I broke that red light on the right :), better color correction… hmm, I still need at least 1 small detail before I get on with the bigger things, outside the scene… any suggestions

#29

I think it’s a bit too light now, maybe slighty darker but only a bit. Hum, for the oudside, maybe some of those big buildings near the end of HL2 (where you loose ‘Dog’), or some big tall building to fill it up.

EDIT: Actually the lightness looks ok.

#30

This is just getting better and better - goes to show that a little feedback goes a long way! Im glad you got rid of the skull!

Looks real nice so far - nice contrast between white concrete and the dark stains around the water level. The only crit i can make is that the red-ish metal wheel on the left seems very big given the comparative size of the ladder. Im not too keen on the HL2 logo either…

Nice work - whats next?

#31

Perhaps you could add a few plants or something. Or perhaps some floating rubbish etc…

:thumbsup:

#32

well, I fixed the textures, bumping, and made a bigger render. Notice that there are some grafits from the actuall game :slight_smile:

#33

Looks very stylish, I like it alot. But one thing I figured out, it’s only a minor thing, so not very hard to fix. The “frame” of the rotor at the right side is too edgy, too lowpoly, please fix it. :smiley:

#34

Frankly that was looking shite at the beginning, I thought to myself ‘Here we go another gamer trying to do r@d 3D’. Boy was I wrong, the scene has turned out beautifully!

Awesome texture work and renders :thumbsup:

#35

Wow, this is exelent now! I’m not too keen on the 2 graffit’s next to each other though. To finish it off I think wooden creates would look great in it - as you always saw them in HL2.

Keep up the good work,

#36

Really really cool scene.
Just one thing; white sky makes this pic a bit empty: you have filthy scene down and clean sky up. I would go with storming sky. Just an idea.
Nice work

#37

I can’t wait to see this scene with well chosen lighting… it’s gonna get creepy for sure

#38

Haha…I love this scene… its beautifullly lit.

I’d love to throw a character of mine in it.
Heh.

Good luck with this.

#39

Wow this looks beautiful. I love this scene. Great job and love the lighting as well.

#40

This is lookin’ really sweet.
The textures, render, lighting, everything, look fantastic.
:thumbsup: from me.

-eric