scene: Bat Man

#21

the changes Coryh proposed realy show how a slightly different composition completely tansforms an image.

I like in that version how the moon is now slightly behind the character, as someone else proposed too. it better shows that typical profile of the batsuit more. the blue light of the moon fits better too.

however, it might be a bit big [the moon]. sure the former one was a bit small, and from the sketch you see there are three main points of interest, the moon, the city and batman, wich is one too much for this image in my opinion. maybe it’s not really to big now, but i feel it floats a bit, being just off the center. either really center or put it a bit more to the right, still making sure batman’s head then is not centered in the moon.

#22

The new version looks awesome. I like how the moonlight shapes his body.
Though I miss contrasts, especially very dark shadows.
What I loved about the first two batman movies and especially the animated series was the dark scary mood. And when I first saw the title I expected your work to be much darker. The empty space behind him was taking away much atmosphere in the first version. It’s better now but still I think we see too much of batman.
I’d love to see really dark shadows in contrast to the moonlight. It would have a much more stronger expression when batmans shadows would mix with the shadows of the building.
I can imagine that you want to point at the statue but for a scary dark batman nightscene I would expect that the moonlight is the only light.
Sometimes we gain more from seeing less.

#23

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