scene: Ambush


#1

Base elemenets in 3dsMax 5.1, then hard work in photoshop 7 … may be 30 hours overall … now i’m happy i get rid of it


#2

Nice work Prasa!
I love the light coming down thrue the holes in the roof…

crit: I am not sure about the setting. It looks like an invasion of a village somewhere in Iraq, and somehow it also looks futuristic (when I look at the buildings - the building that says “Bar” has a window that is high up from the floor…reminds me of that star-wars village…)
Second thing, the soldier walking along the wall blends in too much with the wall itself. I know you probably tried to add strong, heavy sunlight there, but this way the soldier looks like he is made of stone…

Sorry if I am not really clear about what I want to say, but I am soo bad at explaining…

Great job anyway, I realy like your style! :buttrock:


#3

Love the mood. Really nice work!

I agree with shehrevar though, when it comes to the soldier. He really blends into the wall too much… looks almost as though he was carved out of it. There’s also a very unfortunate crack in the wall (behind the soldier), that seems to extend the barrel of his gun… which really makes it look too long and curved :wink:

The setting does seem to be a little futuristic… but I guess that’s what you intended, isn’t it. It might take YEARS before you can find a Sell & Repair for all kinds of hovercrafts in Iraq :D:D

great pic

g.t


#4

The pic itself is great but I think it’s too bright.
A little bit darker and it will be more realistic. :slight_smile:


#5

shehrevar > u are absolutely right with guy along the wall … but just now i hate this picture so much … may be i will tweak it in future … may be not …

cr0ss > i got iiyama ls902ut 19" with brightness set on value 60 and contrast 100 … it is nearly impossible adjust picture to every settings of everyone on this planet … i know fact there are many people with brightness 100, what makes their black color look like cacao, but i like my settings with black looking like black and i will keep it :cool:

t.m0 > crack … hmm … even myself is not sure if it is crack or barrel :slight_smile: … nevermind … u made me so much lool man … with your remark on Iraq-look :slight_smile: … u are right about it … it is mean lika futuro something, litle bit starwars look … i like burning desert light and strong contrast of shadows … and of course i don’t want any stupid flamewar about Iraq in my thread

… and of course … thank u very much all guys for your c&c

:wavey:


#6

Great picture.

…But maybe adding some contrast will make it even better. ( or my monitor is just broken old veteran)


#7

oh, I see :slight_smile:
It’s a little bit bright on my monitor. I’ll change my brigthness to see your work again :slight_smile:

Edit: I’ve changed my brightness to 70 … looks nice


#8

The picture is good as you have i think. The soldier looking as if he blends in with the background I think is more realistic, he is wearing camouflage. When light is as bright and heavy as it is in this picture, what you would be correct although for aesthetic reasons I understand what the previous post were saying.


#9

I like it.


#10

i like it.


#11

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