Ok I’ve braved the crazy world of virus filled internet because I heard about this mecha!!
Very kewl work.
The model from what I can see looks good (dawm near perfect)!
The only thing I can think of as per model work is maybe round out her outer shin maybe …the orange part.
Now comes the fun stuff …“texturing”, and lighting in a nice action scene. becuase you are working with what is essentially a plane I would say to go for as much matt or non-reflective surface color as you can but then that would effect the mech maybe negatively…decisions -decisions.
It's all just opinion anyway and you are the artist so go with what you feel works for the expression ...no doubt it will kick azz just the same given this nice start.