Realistic female head


#1

Crits needed

Cheers

Heres the latest update:


#2

EDIT: nevermind, theres a picture now.

anyway… i can’t tell so much from the ortho-front and zoomy-persp shots… perhaps more angles and a bigger focal length.

as of now though, the lips look good, but something about the upper part of the face looks kind of man-ish… perhaps the brow?

pretty good so far!


#3

Good start. Could we see a profile?

Crits:
The forehead seems to be a bit flat and the overall top of the skull is a bit too large.


#4

Phew…Just finished placing the individual eyelashes (my life sucks!)

I’ll post some more views for you guys in a bit.


#5

Is this view better?


#6

Heres a render test. Still quite a bit to do.


#7

a lot better, actually. i mean, its still hard to see what she could look like since she has no hair, but its better. can i see a profile view? it looks like the back upper skull isn’t rounded enough or is too small.


#8

cheers wgeddes, I pulled back the brow as you suggested. I’ll post a profile and some wires later.

For now heres a render with some SSS.


#9

Nice work here…

it seems the ears need a little more work. it seems seperated from the face :slight_smile:


#10

yea, I agree with the ears, the part closest to the inner ear canal actually is right into the form of the jaw line. What I mean is, you have a slight ring around the ear which shouldnt be there. Otherwise impressive work you have =)


#11

Very Nice !:thumbsup:
I only think you could leave his model with more feminine lines…


#12

think the tops or the ears are to flat.
the nasal area needs some work.
and the dip between nose and top lip needs a little work.
other than that its looking very nice bud.


#13

Ok.

I’ve rounded the tops of the ears and adjusted their placement.

Tweaked the nose a bit.

Refined the skull shape.

Thanks for the help. Keep those crits comin’ :slight_smile:


#14

I’ve started working on the bump map. Just the lips at the moment.

http://www.villagephotos.com/viewpubimage.asp?id_=9342454


#15

No crits? Well here’s the latest. Updated ears, eyelash, nose, and eyebrows.

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2004-7/774169/h12.jpg


#16

The ear is too far back. The jawline also extends a little too far. The texture looks pretty good, but you might want to add some freckles, dimples, a scar, or a mole or something to break it up a little bit.

/slash


#17

i’d second that…but i’d have to look at a side view to be fair…also seem a little small…but this might be more a personal thing than anatomically correct.

definitely improved since i last looked…the nose area and lip area for the better imho…good work…keep it up.


#18

my opinion is that serious but realistic if to remarcar a little but the eyebrows, except for that reason demas this enough good


#19

Cheers guys, I’ve moved the ear and jaw forward and started the hair opacity mapping…hair is hard :slight_smile:


#20

GODDAMMIT!!! Why do my imagelinks always die!!

Sorry guys, heres the link

http://www.villagephotos.com/viewpubimage.asp?id_=9358041