Races Of The Middle Earth - Character - Ila Solomon

#128

good to see you working on the challenge again ila :slight_smile: a little crit from my side would be the deltoids, they look a little short. might look better if you made them a little longer.
much better muscles now though :thumbsup:

#129

Nice. He’s more interesting in 3d than I was expecting, based on your sketch. Although those striations on the outside of his chest don’t look very natural at all to me.

#130

My Dear Anders, comments from you always are welcome, (that “more fats, less muscles” are because of you :slight_smile: )
:cheers:

#131

Wow :buttrock:

the sketch looks great !
and what a scary necklace:D

#132

:slight_smile: Thanx Kogepan & H13 :slight_smile:

#133

Okay! close’up + lil upd.

#134

:bounce:

I like where u are going with your character …so much power in his appearance…Great muscle structure on his body…will u make veins on his muscles too? :bounce: :bounce:
…and will the spots be on his final texturing dominant element?:bounce:

#135

Originally posted by ila_solomon
My Dear Andres, comments from you always are welcome, (that “more fats, less muscles” are because of you :slight_smile: )

My Dear Ila, I hope this helps too.

only 2 things:

  • now I find the mouth too human, and I think it is because of the shape of the lips. (specially in the picture before the last one). Try giving it a wilder shape… think of orcs trolls… :slight_smile:
  • in the front view I’ve noticed something like a hunch… I’m not sure if that’s part of the head or if he’s actually a hunchback. Anyways, that looks strange. Can you post a side view?

He looks so agressive… I can’t wait to see the whole thing.

#136

My Dear Andrés, comments from you always are welcome too :slight_smile: :thumbsup:

#137

body…will u make veins on his muscles too?
…and will the spots be on his final texturing dominant element?

Dimitri, I’d like to add veins, I give it a try, & yes those spots are one of his skin’s charastrictics. but now they are very raw & just for demo.

Ila

#138

:bounce: U are the first one who says my name correctly in CGtalk…i am touched!!!:beer:

#139

heeeheee

He’s got more chins than anyone ever:) LOve the concept and the model…It’s all looking fantastic…I especially love the style of the horns (very stylish)…can’t wait to see him all walkin around and talkin, seeing that flab swish and swash would be execelent:)

#140

haha dur23…not as many chins as the gizzard :)…
really nice stuff ila!!! .I’m loving the look of him now. Its exciting to watch this one grow!!.

:beer:
btw…not sure if i mentioned this before but your flying machine kicked much butt :slight_smile:

#141

I really like your charactere Ila :wink: really nice, and could really be in the tolkien Story.

i mean most of the thread i ve see look like more star trek or star war race :wink: but your race is definitly a middle Earth Race… :bounce:

#142

Dimitris: :wink:
[b]dur23, Fetus23, THANX a lot :beer:
Erik, That is a big compeliment for me, thank you very much.

ok, I’ve done some updates: The legs, but still WIP (also the are between legs & stomach will cover with cloth, just like the sketch)

& this is a render for fun, MetalDeev! :

#143

Ila !!!
I Love your Job , & I believe in U !!

Faghat ye chizi ,
Bebakhshid ke ezhare nazar mikonam , be nazare man pahash koloft shode … be khosoos saghe pash . Shekamesh ham Gonde tar beshe bahal tare (midoonam ye ghesmate pooshide mishe !) … baz ham begam midoonam to in chizaro behtar az man mifahmi !!

I want to see this DEEV … Go on Boy …

Reza Misaghi

#144

baraaye man aaliye vali baraaye ILA na!
dar zemn REZA baahaat movaafegham…
ILA age mishe az namaahaaye dige ham DEEV_o neshoon bedi mamnoon misham:thumbsup:

#145

hey man, looks great (love the horns btw, brilliant way of doing them)

If i might make 1 suggestion, why not shrink the head down or make the bdoy bigger? I think that woulld really add to his size! right now his head feels to big imo…

great work tho man, your sketch was breathtaking to! definetly a nice bit of modeling here! can’t wait to see full texture…and hands…tho stumps are interesting to :slight_smile:

#146

Hi Friends, yes…after watching it & watching & watchin…I agree with you, the head is big, the legs are to thick & the stomach is small!..thank dudes, I’ll change/adjust things soon.
The back is still very rough, but i’ll show the back-stage too.
Regards
Ila

#147

agha ila damet garm kheili bahali hala esmesh chie fekr konam
iloger bad nabashe