OK for a brief thought…I like the collar bone you have created very much. I already told you what I think of the rest thus far ( Very nice)… I think I am getting a feeling that it’s looking to go towards the very stylistic route.
In this case perhaps a narrow waist,extra narrow I think. Increased muscle definition,seperation etc,etc...
I think go for a more exxagerated look and feel.........It seems this praticular model you are creating is best suited for this. Longer,more elegant,a surreal type being,but with a fun toon aspect to it. Just my thoughts for now. Just another opinion for you,it could help some in the end.

In time I will give my 2 cents on details,intricate ones,extras for that added beauty and flavor. Bumps,props,texture thoughts, and more. But until then I really like what you have done so far. See you soon..............:wavey: :beer: