Hey Frinsklen!! That’s great!
but… what’s happening with his face? Ouh! I see… He’s a TimidMan from Middle Earth. In such a case… It’s cool.
His torso is a little flat… you have a diffuse color… shadows… the next step… is the light?
I’m following you too… since you were a little baby … and I was it too 
Thanks for the replies everyone.
Hey Pabbloz, great to have you abroad. 
Lichiman: you’re right about the torso, don’t worry about that yet, there’s lots of work to do… 
Time for some background story…
[i]These guys were once humans, humans that escaped from Mordor when Sauron was defeated. [...] The lack of Sauron's guidance they were linked to has turned them into these weak creatures.
They live in dark woods, or in caves, hidden where stronger creatures can't find them, since they're afraid of anything that looks superior in strength or wisdom. They're not specially hostile and never talk to other races.[/i]
and that’s enough! :rolleyes: sorry for not coming up with anything better, I just don’t have the time!
Looking your sketches I’m understanding yuor critique about the pos of my character in effect you are searching a dynamic pose in yuor work really different from mine.
Hi again…
Carlocki: haha, an excellent point!
-OZ-: thanks. Hey, non hai tempo per il tuo hangly ma hai tempo per fare osservazioni? just joking man, thanks a lot, you deserve an update!
Hi Frinsklen I like it. Nice work on the skin you’ve added some nice contrasts in there and some nice details in the change of colour. but where is the background!:bounce: C’mon man there’s gotta be a setting you’re thinking of!
Good work Frinsklen, it’s good you practice your 2D skills! come on!
I think you should now work in a cleaner update. So, clean the contorn lines and define better the colors.
You could make a background… why not… by I think you will learn more if you try to finish just the character with the highest quality as you can.
so… work work wokr on the black lines! :wip:
Nice character…I like his pose. I think it would be great if you could get rid of the black lines and add a background.:wip:
Thanks everyone once again.
I don’t understand exactly what you guys mean by “black lines” but since I’ve used a pencil drawing as reference (see first page) I guess you mean the lines of the pencil layer that are still there.
So I tried to remove them:
Image without pencil reference layer
and as you can see, it sucks.
This is my first digital painting, so any help with this would be great.
oh, I forgot to say that I’m color-blind, so if you see any weird colors or anything that doesn’t make sense, please tell me! :rolleyes:
Originally posted by pabbloz
You could make a background… why not… by I think you will learn more if you try to finish just the character with the highest quality as you can.
Time’s running out so that’s what I’m going to do
Hey frinsklen! Nice character and lovely pose…Here’s my crits (first digital drawing? good job if thats the case!)
First of all your colors are too desaturated, kinda blends in to one another, try to push the contrast it will do you good, second of all try to be more dynamic with your lighting. You know that a 3d image with cheesy lighting makes it look incredebly flat, it’s the same in 2d you can’t cheat your way out of that
About the black lines, I think they mean that the character itself doesn’t have enough volume, if you add black outlines (inked) then it will look cartoony but if you go with darker and lighter skincolor outlines you will get a more realistic look, the choice is up to you but I suggest that you always keep your reference sketch in it’s own layer and work down the opacity for that layer. (As you color you turn the opacity more and more down till the layer is completely gone)
Also the hair could use a little bit more detail.
Well hope I have been to some assistance.
Keep it up!
Thanks Royal, great critiques, I totally agree.
I’m currently working on what you said about the darker and lighter skin.
I’ll add more contrast in the end.
Nice stuff!
I know that you are finished with it and everything but I did a really fast paintover to illustrate some of my earlier comments.
I added a bolder outline and played with contrast lighting a bit, I’m not sure it’s better but it’s another approach of it at least
Keep up the good work:bounce:
thanks guys!
Royal: thanks a lot, man. Now I see. It obviously needed more volume and better lighting, thanks for taking the time to do that. I won’t forget those advices for my next digital painting.
when i started looking i wasnt reading. just absorbing the images. at 1st glance with no background story the blood did not read to me as blood. maybe a touch more saturated and a lil darker. is it still wet? blood becomes darker the more oxygen gets to it and can become almost black if lets say he killed something hours ago and hasnt washed his hands. i love your line weight and the feel of your marks in the begining. bravo:applause:
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