previz: Scenes 19 to 28

#1

Just opening this thread up so I don’t have to later on when I have progress to post.

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Shot 19 uploaded
Shot 20 uploaded
Shot 21 uploaded
Shot 22 uploaded
Shot 23 uploaded
Shot 24 uploaded
Shot 25 uploaded
Shot 26 uploaded
Shot 27 uploaded
Shot 28 uploaded
Final Shot Comp 19-28 uploaded

#2

Here are the links to shots 19 and 20:
Shot 19
Shot 20

#3

Here is Shot 23 - I’ve changed the codac to MPEG-4 so it should play a bit better than the previous two clips. The fall needs to be paced a little faster and I’ll update that as I go along.

Shot 23

#4

Link to Shot 21

#5

Some crit for you as well: :smiley:
[ul][li]Shot 19: I think you should have him take a short hop backwards in this one. In the previous shot he’s banging his head on the wall, but in shot 20 you have him placed too far back for this to make sense. Scene 19 would be a good place for him to step back to take a look at the hole up above him.[*]Shot 23: Yes the drop is too long. But the turn is weird too. He only turns 90 degrees when it should be 180.[/ul]
[/li]Pace your shots out better. Every scene is not going to be 2 seconds in length. Visualize what is happening in each scene and try to pace the timing according to how long each action should take. In shot 23 he falls, looks up at the hole, pauses in anticipation of his next move and then decides to turn around. This has a different pace than ‘fall-turn-go’ … does that make sense?

I couldn’t download shot 21. File not found.

#6

You got it, thanks Kirt.

#7

Shot 19 has been updated, see above link, to improve timing etc…

#8

Shot 20 is now updated Link to Shot 20

The rest of the shots are nearing completion and will be up soon.

#9

Hi there! Please check out the 2d animatic thread for an idea of the stage we’re at in the previs.

Will you be able to finish the scenes before wednesday? We need to have them together to show the animators before they start animating away.

If you are under time pressures, let me know and I will delegate a couple of scenes to other people… if not, that’s fine!! :slight_smile:

#10

Here is the link to Shot 28 , small about 2 secs. in length.

#11

Here is the link to Shot 21.

I’m not sure I like this shot following the previous one (shot 20) as it is a jump cut and pretty harsh. I was thinking that if we deviated from the storyboard a bit and kept the same shot angle as 20 then it would flow a bit better. Once I finish all my shots I’ll go back and redo this one in the manner that I’m refering to.

#12

Here is Shot 22 and Shot 24.

I have also put up the revised Shot 21 which I’m calling Shot 21b, just to be different.

#13

Here are the links to Shot 23 and Shot 25.
I’ll post the last couple of shots in a couple of hours along with the full clip.

#14

Here are the links to Shot 26, Shot 27, and the Final Edited Shot

#15

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