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@NickSilva - really like your concepts of the Shadow defeating the General. I like that you’ve thought about the backstory now instead of trying to paste something appropriate in later on! and the scenes are actionpacked - helmet/costume designs really good too, and show the same dedication to preparation. Look forward to seeing more development on the bloodshed 
@BaronImpossible - Love your Corrupted and Shadow together and can’t wait to see the colour start flowin. Only one ‘Devils advocate’ question - and a really pernicketty personal one at that - is: “Does the Shadow HAVE to be wearing high heels?” XD
@ahbeejieh - Love your general. Looks like he’d have as much trouble getting in and out of that armour as his enemies would
and your idea for the Mage is great - I think you could have lots more impact by exaggerating the ‘attack’ pose more - Really has the potential to be scary!
@Soulspline - Great concepts both. I still love the first one best I think & Want to see more detail!
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…Brainfart commencing…
So - I decided that a TechMage would undoubtedly be able to fly, and so his ‘tank’ is slowly becoming a kind of cleopatra armchair with Saurons lazer eye on the crest :B - I realised his scale was all out of whack compared to the silhouetted soldiers he is frying, so I shrunk him down and he also now has three acolytes; operating the controls for him - while he relaxes in his comfy throne.

The Fortress still needs work compositionally as I’d like to show a lot more Marines (or whatever the opposition turn out to be) on gantries and walkways and stuff - getting fried by the lazer and splattered by rail guns and the like. So that might have to change. It needs to look like the lazer is taking out a big swathe of enemies effortlessly. It probably need to be less 'castle’y and more modern
My wife suggests I turn the TekMage to face the enemy a bit more, as she thinks it looks like he’s trying to hunt down the Shadow character. I think she’s probably right & I don’t want that: as they need to look like they’re working on the same team - Obviously any advice concerning Composition and colours etc. from you guys would be really welcome at this stage 
(@neurolinked - Thanks for comment on the red version of the Shadow, I’m thinking maybe you’re right. Urg - I have real trouble with colours, but the thing that is coming to the front of my mind is making the two characters look like part of the CGS team, and we definitely have the best colours to work with 