really superb face model - wish I could model them to that level (slight bit feminine around the lips for MY taste … not sure why might just look like he has lipstick on but that may be deliberate). Unfortunately it feels ruined because of the blood on the mouth now unless the gay vampire is what your going for
put some clothes on him (even just a simple scarf like material) - feels like a bare model behind two wood structures… could try adding some more slight differences in each side (insect on one side or something or more worn woodwork/metal detailing) …lighting variations too.
just suggestions - otherwise really great work
edit - just seen it is a vampire you’ve done doh! my mistake but I’d still look at correcting that blood …maybe add some on a wall too (history…history!!) and make it look like he’s exiting the room by positioning him less symetrical (as if the two wood bits in front are the edges of a door and he’s walking out after brutally killing his prey)… hope that make sense?