I think the idea of a cyber-punk Harry Potter is original, haha.
My crit is that if you hadn’t told us this was Harry, then it could have been just anyone…I mean, he just doesn’t look like Harry. Maybe that wasn’t your intention, but wouldn’t it be nicer if there was some recognition in his face, or expression, of the old Harry?
Also, maybe try to do something about the places where the skin touches the cyberparts…some scars, flesh growing over the metal, etc.
hmm…his expression is a little weird too…His eye seems to express nothing, while his mouth does, allthough I am not sure what…
Sorry if I am being harsh, but it could be rather nice with the ideas you have, keep it up! 