Please help me to improve!

#11

Hey SundayNights,

The points made about polycounts is highly subjective - Polycount doesn’t come into the equation unless you’re in Games Art like myself. VFX’s only restriction is render times/meeting the deadline/your workstations limitations.

The best suggestion so far is to model something you can have in front of you and examine in fine detail as you model.

Modelling from tutorials can only teach you so much, I personally found that reading the Topology thread on this website to help the most - The most important thing you need to learn is the theory behind edge-flow. Understanding why the mesh acts the way it does when smooth/deforming will allow you to get things right first time - and fix it when it doesn’t quite work out :stuck_out_tongue:

Never hurts to sketch what you’re abouts to model - paying close attention to the planes and defining features. Before Zbrush I found drawing over my sketches a rough-edgeflow often helped me avoid issues with poor topology!

Look forward to see’ing some high-res stuff

#12

Hello there,

so, I modeled today and tried to cope with very high poly. First I started a basketball-shoe but this was somehow too difficult for me, so I did a (japanese) fan. So I am not sure if this is high poly enough. I also spended more time rigging and skin-weighting it than modelling… I will try again something more difficult - but maybe not my old shoe (might be better for zbrush/mudbox). The render is with maya-software.


fächer_show von Sundaynights auf Flickr

#13

Ok, here a better attempt to model something high poly.

I tried to model after this video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LFqopkUTO0Q&feature=relmfu

I am sure I got some features wrong, but I hope the edgeflow is right. I think I did better with the transition between eye and outer part of the scull - but I certainly had problems with the fold of the eyes and where they shout start and end, as the video didn’t showed that so well. I should buy also a table-mirror. ^^
I am also unsure of the inward folding of the mouth-corner.


female_head_18.09.2012_mentalray von Sundaynights auf Flickr


female_head_18.09.2012_viewport_wire von Sundaynights auf Flickr

As I followed the video the style should be livelike but still symmetrical. ( I think symmetrical is best for rigging and animation -the symmetrie can get broken then with a blendshape)

Critiques are really welcome! I am looking forward to see which parts are ok and which should get improved.

#14

The mesh looks more or less ok. The only problematic parts are the outer sides of the eyes (the temples actually with that abrupt change of density plus that connection with that transverse quad right in that curvy shape), and the loop around the corners of the mouth should get fully continuous (regular curve) - the curve should follow the nasolabial fold all around the mouth (your loops seem to be pressed in toward the mouth corners).

Personally i don’t agree that much with the alignment of the wire at the jaws, having there mostly a troublesome area. IMO better to fully follow the jaw line. But i have seen many models done like yours, working fine at the end when raising the resolution.

The overall density isn’t flawless from a theoretical point of view. The rule is: same curve requires same amount of loops (exception: areas, which will bend even more by morphing or rigging, needing then slightly higher density). So the double density on the cheeks (compared to the forehead for example) might be somewhat too high (even if planning strong cheek action…), but perhaps you’re right with preferring continuous loops there.

As for the shape:

  • the bridge of the nose is sticking out too much (at eye level).
  • chin and mouth area are somewhat pushed forward (in side view).
  • ears seem to be somewhat worn out… plus small and thin
  • that ‘double shape’ at the outer brows is questionable (should be continuous)
  • nose could be much wider, the sides getting almost below the inner eye corners (also on cute faces with very wide eye positions).
#15

Hi Zokana,

thanks for your advice. I will make the adjustments and try to apply them also to my next models. Here first a quick paintover.


female_head_19.09.2012_wire_paintover von Sundaynights auf Flickr

So, if I understand you right: if I want to have the actually density on the cheeks I should also add density on the forehead?
I used the ear as shown above in my first post but was unsure how big I should make them… will make them a lil bit sicker and fleshier!

#16

Yes, the ideas for corrections seem to be fine. Except perhaps the widening of the nose - the width of the bridge is ok while it’s more the lower part needing volume.

The other way, i’d say. (i’d lower the density on the face) But you’re right when keeping the current density on the face.

#17

My suggestion
Get the topology right first, then get proportion right. Post your updated image, & we can look into the next step.

#18

Oh too bad they turned you down and yes that’s the Acht Frankfurt, fingers crossed :slight_smile: Only apply with your best stuff and watch video tutorials about modeling, texturing, shading and rendering. There’s plenty of stuff out there.
Critic wise a lot has been said by the others already. Hmm pick something you can get a lot of reference photos about as well as texture material (you might just shoot by yourself).

Cheers
Andre

#19

I also thought, that just modelling along with a video without any reference isn’t the best way to get good results, but it helped to get the process down and see how and where the edges flow. I will work on the first head and make the adjustments tonight, but for now I want to show you a new version of a human head/face that I did with reference.
Forgive me that I hadn’t the patience to set up lights and render it out.

The reference: I had a hard time lining them up and the ear isn’t in the exact same position.

xray:
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/sundaynights/8009326791/]
wires:
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/sundaynights/8009335072/]
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/sundaynights/8009327117/]
viewport view:
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/sundaynights/8009326893/]
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/sundaynights/8009326979/]
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/sundaynights/8009326979/]

what do you think?
I tried to let one edge stay where the jaw line should be, and I broke up the symmetry.

I was at the main station, sending someone off, and was stunned how many different faces there are. I tried to imagen how I would model them and where to put the lines and so on.
I definetly will do more faces!

#20


female_face_WIP21.09.2012 von Sundaynights auf Flickr

and here the worked on version of the previous female head. I think she looks like a gypsy now and I want to get her black long hair, with wavy eyebrows, big eyelashes, flowing garmets and big earrings.
I used the reference from PKD to match proportions. Thank you PKD!
Is there a good side for modeller reference like you posted? Or just big brother google?

#21

I like your new model (the first you’ve posted now). The only problem with the mesh:

  1. that ‘cobweb’ formation above the ears
  2. the very straight loops at the inner brow area
  3. and that pulling up of the wire to the ears at her neck. The lower res at the sides of the neck would cause problems when rigging (the loops have also to follow the shape of the planned bending)

The shape has some nice attempts but it’s partially overdone - especially cheeks and jaw remind slightly on a potato (especially in 1/4 view) - get more subtle there and also your victim (your real model) will like it much more.

An other point is the rear half of the head, needing more attention.(the widest area of a skull is right behind the ears when looking from above) And keep an eye on the back of the head also in 1/4 views, looking somewhat strange at the moment. Plus give the model those nice ears instead of such large things (not reaching down that low at all).

An other tip: better to use tele angle lenses when photographing someone for ref - the center of the picture is otherwise enlarged due to distortion, getting then large noses, large cheeks, large ears, etc. If you don’t have such a camera then do the shot from further away and crop the head later.

#22

Thanks Zokana,

you have good points there!
I’ll work on her and adjust her as soon as I can.

An other tip: better to use tele angle lenses when photographing someone for ref - the center of the picture is otherwise enlarged due to distortion, getting then large noses, large cheeks, large ears, etc. If you don’t have such a camera then do the shot from further away and crop the head later.

I actually first startet with a very close-up taken photo and realized when it came to the ear that something isn’t right (because they actually got cut off). I took a shot from farer away (the ones from reference are just zoomed in), but it might be still somewhat distorted as I made them with my smartphone. I’ll test my digicam - maybe it makes better reference photos.
I fear that I can’t affort to buy tele angle lenses for my cam - that’s costy phew.

#23

So here the update. Spend some hours to change everything suggested and I am more happier with the outcome now! Also there are now only quads except for one tris at every ear (on the inside) - but since the ear has already to many lines I decided to let it be.
I couldn’t remove the net of the ear fully as I think I need this to make a nicer transition and also to get that nice rounded shape of the ears back - I know it’s somehow wasted becaus ther is really no need for it as the hair should cover most of the parts. I also decided to break the center line - she is unsymmetrical and should therefore never be mirrored again - so no need for a continous center line and space to get rid of some extra edges.

Do I have enough lines at the neck now? Is the ear still too big?
I also added the wrinkles on the lower part of the eyes without adding geometry. It would look better with more geometry (I think) - but maybe mudbox/zbrush would do a better job at that.

And I am getting more comfortable at working with a higher mesh (and also more comfortable modelling faces).

#24

Much improved.

Proportion is much improved. Next step is to get the main shape rights.

#25

Hey PKD, thanks!
could you be more precise what shapes I did wrong and how to solve the issues? I could do closer up pictures of the areas you might want to see better. (from the mesh and from the real person)

#26

Nice improvements, Sundaynights! Some likeness starts to get noticeable. Did you make new shots, or are you working with the shown refs?

Some crits, as far evaluable with these refs:
• the head is rather narrow (while the distance of the eyes shouldn’t get wider)
• lower lip could look much smoother, also that slight ‘double chin’ is overdone, nostrils are huge and sharp, plus jaw line is extremely sharp as well (you could be much nicer to your real model… i mean it seriously >> try to get her as beautiful as you can. Her face has very subtle and smooth shapes in reality >> try to get that!)
• ears are huge as well and their shape is off.

But as mentioned: it’s coming nicely! :thumbsup:

#27

Start with the eyes area. Its was a paintiver I did a while back, but its applicable to your model. Basically, you should not have a sink in (or concave at side of the eyes.)

#28

Hey guys,

thanks for the advice and sorry for not updating for so long - I was quite busy and hadn’t time to do the adjustments quicker.

So here is the new version - I decided to reduce confusion and only work on the head with reference. Since it is myself I didn’t shoot more photos and just used the mirror for the critical parts. The overall proportions are still fitting with the referencephotos.

I made the ear much smaller and reduced the fleshy part of the cheeks. I hope there is no concave part around the eyes anymore as I pushed points there over and over again.
I tend to like the mesh more every time I work on it. Overall she is now much nicer and softer I think. If you are also happy with her I would move on with a lil bit of detailing in mudbox and then of course texturing her. (I tried also to lay out the UVs)





C&C welcome!

#29

Looking better!

Its a bit tough to judge the model from such small screen grabs. You can turn your thumbnail images into a link to a larger image hosted offsite by using…

[url =LINKTOLARGEIMAGE]

I had to add the space to get the line to print, but don’t add any spaces when you post your image.

As far as your UVs go, try to fill up more of the square if you can. Use a soft selection tool to scale up your ears, nose, lips, and mouth. You need more resolution on those parts, and less on the top of the head.

-AJ

#30

And i thought it was your sister being your victim… :smiley: It’s a good update with much cleaner shapes! There is a major issue and a view minor ones i’d address now:

  • the back of the head isn’t wide enough behind and above the ears. Check skulls in top view!! Correcting that will change also the overall form of the head in frontal view, losing then the current pointy egg shape.

  • plus the minor stuff: cheeks bones right in front of the ears should go up a bit; eyes are slightly too small; mouth is slightly too wide; and the chin should be wider (compare the width of the facial parts by drawing vertical lines)