Please Critique please

#1

Please tell me what you think guys.

i need some Flash critique on my toons

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/146408
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/146561
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/37312
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/33652
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/57943

part a
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/57942
Part b
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/57942

#2

Hey Flog,

Just wondering exactly what you want us to critique? sound, animation, story, everything?

Cheers!
K

#3

yeah, everything, break it down.

Thanks

#4

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