"PAINTOVER PLEASE" - painted crits on demand - with Steven Stahlberg


#1710

Put some changes in there myself… But please let me know your suggestions.


#1711

Ok, I did it, sorry about the delay. Hope it’s clear. I straightened her trigger finger, because we never ever ever ever ever put it on the trigger unless we plan to shoot something within a few seconds. :slight_smile:
And a few other tweaks, perspective on the mecha head, her chest, etc.


#1712

Hello! I’m totally new to this site, so I hope I’m not doing anything wrong. I was really hoping to get some help with a painting I’m working on. A problem I’m having is likeness, as this is supposed to be Margaery Tyrell, but I’m unsure whether that’s obvious enough. The painting itself also just seems off, but I’m afraid I don’t have the skill to recognise what exactly is wrong with it! I suspect the jaw is a problem, as is the unnatural-looking hair. Either way, I’d appreciate any pointers you could give. What you’re doing is really great!


#1713

Here’s Margaery, subtle changes but important ones, because it’s where this actress “deviates from the norm” so to speak, another way to say, these are the things that make her recognizable.
When you find those deviations, don’t hesitate to push them, you can’t go wrong - if you go too far, it simply looks like a skillful charicature. :slight_smile:


#1714

Thank you so much, that helps a lot! :slight_smile:


#1715

Hope this thread is still alive… mood I think is that oh crap moment when a bit huge thing just destroyed everything in its path and is coming towards you. This is the most I can get with it, I feel that its missing that finished or polished look. the lighting seems kinda shady too, thanks!


#1716

I’m looking for a job right now but I’ll get to it asap


#1717

sweet thanks, i look forward to it!


#1718

Hello Mr Stahlberg,

I’ve been working on this for a while and confusing about lighting and composition. At this moment I don’t know how to fix some problems that I did not realized .
Thank you very much indeed for your suggestions.


#1719

Here’s this one…


#1720

here’s this one
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#1721

thanks very much indeed, it helps a lot!


#1722

Wow that’s pretty sexy, thanks! I like how the contrast created more of a mood.


#1723

Hi hi, and Merry Christmas! :slight_smile:

Could you possibly help me out with a bit of anatomy on Katarina, please? Although I have looked up references for the pose and even tried photographing myself in it - I still feel something is wrong with the back/waist/buttocks area…but I can’t put my finger on it :frowning:
If you can, please - thank you so much in advance!


#1724

Here is my advice. The pose feels wrong because it’s awkward, not natural, particularly as part of a movement, which this obviously is. Her spine is twisted one way, but the closer arm is reaching the opposite way. The head is also slightly out of position, and the whole back is too long. I also angled the leg a bit. It’s interesting that you tried the pose, you didn’t feel it was a bit unnatural? Anyway hope it helps.


#1725

Happy New Year!
That is so much better, thank you for taking the trouble to look over the rest too :slight_smile:
Well to be honest initially I was going for a pose similar to the one you painted over (hands-wise mostly speaking), and used a pose reference from senshistock - but it still felt a bit too…re-active for Katarina’s character. So I chose to go with a pose that was more pro-active trying to suggest a spinning motion in mid-air while preparing to strike. Didn’t find any pose references for this one though so that’s why it might look awkward, because of my fail anatomy haha.


#1726

I think the reason you couldn’t find reference is because it’s an unnatural pose. :slight_smile:
I found a couple bishoujo statues here that have somewhat similar poses to my suggestion

http://www.gunjap.net/site/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/2154.jpg

http://www.toytards.com/images/Tekken%20Bishoujo%20Nina%20Williams.jpg


#1727

Yeah, I think you are right :slight_smile:
You are amazing - I don’t know you and you don’t know me and yet you spend your time not only helping with my initial request but tweaking more of the pic and also sending me references. To be honest it’s been ages since anyone did something that nice for me, at least art-wise - you are one of a kind and make my heart smile, thank you :slight_smile:


#1728

hi. i’m new in cg and i’m working with a wacom tab for 6 months. the main problem of my painting is when i work with values and after working on gray scale i find it incomplete to add color in layer mode. i mean when i start to put some color on it , it becomes unnatural. can u work on this and add color on it, thanks. and tell me where i am wrong.


#1729

Well the first thing I see is there’s no light in this image, except a tiny little rimlight and some very faint shading in some places… it’s basically cartoony. For natural color you need light. I’ll work on it a bit, invent a light and go from there.