Optimus Prime


#1

Hi,

I’m a beginner in modelling and also this my first attempt at modelling a character. It’s very much a work in progress, which will be used in a ShockWave presentation.

I post this to know what the pro’s think about it. I can take a lot of critic as long as it is constructive.

This was done in Cinema 4D.


#2

Guess it’s bad huh?


#3

The face is to smooth and the body has no shape.
Perheps you should start over or try something new.


#4

reminds my of my toy I had as a child… wounder where it whent…
Transformers are a bit hard to modell tou they have only sharp corners and still move theyr mouths as if they where organic…
but u need to make the whole modell more pointy… lose the smoothing grups…


#5

looks fine to me.:thumbsup:

Though do take The_Row’s advice though it’ll make it better.

Don’t forget its your model do with it as you wish. :wise:


#6

We can’t see it, the pic must be down.


#7

I saw it a while ago must have gone down recently.


#8

hehe …wel wel taxxodium …I now you !..and you know me :slight_smile:

check out clawz http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=156953 and maybe you’ll recognize the style ?
Somewhere between gent en oudenaarde we have met !

en ik kan uw image niet bekijken ?

greets
clawz


#9

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