Rebecca…not sure that I understand what you just said…should I soften the cloth,…get rid of it…is the whole cloth distracting, or just the bottom part by the waters edge. Do I need to render it more, or less …not sure…
IT’S the brightest part in the original painting…meant to bring the focus to the main figures
face…I think…when you get some time, let me know in more detail about what you just said,
and I will fix it if I can…:shrug:
It’s totally just my personal opinion, feel free to just ignore me. I think the cloth is distracting and looks really distinct in style from the rest of the really softly atmospheric picture you’ve constructed…and I can’t tell if it’s cloth, or water that has a mind of it’s own, so it’s a little bit confusing.
But, of course it’s totally up to you…to me it just stands out as distinct from the rest of the picture.
MRS SPIRIT DREAMER told me the exact same thing a couple of days ago, that you just told me. Of course I ignored her…being stuborn as I AM, and of course knowing more about ART
than her…LOL!! …and again of course being the fool that I am at times, I LEFT IT THE WAY IT WAS. But as any fool knows, when TWO WOMEN tell you that your wrong…it is time to LISTEN.
I just softened it up…looks like it belongs now…much better…I THINK …LOL!!
Will post it tonight, to see if it passes the test…LOL!!:eek:
PS…Mrs Spirit Dreamer… My better half… will be working on that CG net working thing this weekend…THANKS AGAIN…Rebecca…
Look for OFDW 015 late this Sunday / early Monday. I usually try to post the new OFDW around midnight Sunday (my time, US EST). But that’s an approximation, so I like to give a bit of leeway. Even mods have lives.
Generally, I announce the latest OFDW on the CGSociety Forum, the General Discussion Forum, the Art Theories and Techniques Forum, and the WIP 2D Forum ~ plus you’ll see it when you visit the Anatomy Forum ~ so I’d say it would be pretty hard to miss.
Hi Rebecca and Everyone
Working on cloth and the area between satyr and the two nymphs who are making arm contact with him. Made cloth softer to go with the rest of the picture more and re-shaped it to go around the leg of far nymph, exposing her leg in the process.
Still a lot of work in that center area of figures to do.
Plus the foreground etc.
Learning a whole lot on the painting as I go. And thanks alot Rebecca for pointing that cloth out to me.
Take Care
Glenn
just want to say thanks to Amerasu and Rebeccak for their compliments. i had my graduation today!!! now i gotta find a job. i dont plan on presenting my demo reel to any companies through youtube, i just put it up on there for some friends to check out…i need to make a website. and i got my wacom tablet today…my girlfriend got me one for graduation, so today i was trying it out…its gonna take some time to get used to it…but im excited.
As a CGTalk member, you can upload 5 images to what amounts to your own webpage, with your own URL. For example, here is my CGPortfolio:
(I’m a CGSociety member, so I can upload more than 5 images). But the features for a free CGTalk member are still really cool! This is one of the biggest things CGTalk has done in a while, and I would encourage everyone to take advantage…it’s much easier than creating your own webpage.
The one downside of using CGP as your only webpage is that a potential employer gets to see all of your competition. However, bear in mind that people are posting stuff from all over the world, so you’re not likely to be in hot competition from someone in Canada if you are living in Peru, for example. So it’s definitely something to look into.
Down the line they also plan to have animation hosting, so that’s further incentive to look into it.
Hi Rebecca and everyone
Worked on refining hands and center area of figures.
I put a smile on the nymph…not sure if I am going to keep it or not…
Need some opinions on the smile…I have about 20 different versions of her face…after twelve hours on this today, I am going a little blind. Help!
Take Care
Glenn
A huge THANK YOU to all of you who participated, both as artists and as cheerleaders, here on the OFDW 014!! :applause: Everyone did a FANTASTIC job, and it’s so inspiring to see so much great work popping up everyday on the forum!! :arteest:I’m happy to announce that OFDW 015 has started, and can be found here:
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[left]I can’t wait to see the work everyone does for OFDW 015, and I hope to see everyone there! :bounce:
Please note that while OFDW 015 has started, folks are still free to post here on OFDW 014 until such time as they have completed their paintings. However, I encourage people to move on quickly to the next OFDW, as it is much more fun to work within the group.
About had enough of this one for awhile.
Ended up with 10 decent versions all different in color lighting and expression.
Liked this one the best at the moment so thought I would post it.
Also tried out Zbrush for the very first time this morning.
Posted my very first Zbrush work, a demon’s head, on my personal thread in case anyone is interested.
I think this came to a nice resolution, Glenn! I really love the warm tones and the soft feel to this. Nice work! Looking forward to seeing your work for OFDW 015.
GREAT ONE…Zhuzhu…has that same spontaneity and freshness that you captue so well in your water colors…also like the background… looks like a drama on stage…NICE… :applause:
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