I have to agree, the render does show case some nice light…but IMO, being some one who reads popbot I dont get this image really convaying the mood and feel of the books.
but on the tec side of things I think you could have done much much more with some detailed color, spec and bump maps. most of the surfaces end up a but flat in color detail and your relying to much on the lighting effects.
So in the end a huge render time like that for a single frame is niether productive or needed.
now the model is nice so props there, but the composition is also a bit lacking
I’m not sure if this will be helpful or not but here are some points for tweeks
1 - paint up some detailed maps color, spec, bump
2 - Try a differnet set or bring up the texture levels on the walls and stairs
3 - light as you would a set Key, fill, rim and if you are going to use FG or other light effects use them sparingly as a fill not as the main source.
well keep on posting your ideas ar good and the modeling is there for sure.
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