need c&c


#1

hi CGSociety first post here need C&C if u have time


#2

Hi welcome to CG Society !
It seems that you are learning anatomy which is great. This character being a female, I believe you need to tone down the anatomy way down. It’s good you entered all that information there so that way you can always pull back your information. Her shoulders are very broad and to have an appealing woman, think in terms of subtlety and curves/rhythms. Even for the face, you wouldn’t want any sort of wrinkle information as that would make her look more aged. Now if she is an old lady, then put all the wrinkles you want ! :wink: