my portfolio website

#1

This is my portfolio website. Please comment
www.creationdelivery.com

#2

Hi Mangwee

Like the way you’re going there,
but you could go a step further.

for example:
The enter Button is…well…i think u were a little lazy there,
the idea with the vertical lines is to good to not be used!!

or the color of the roll over!! don’t just use simple color!! use a
little effect, or use a color which fits better the whole page!
like a light brown, which changes to a dark brown.

For the rest…keep up the work

Greetz H.2.O

#3

I think it’s too simple for a portfoilo. Also u “underuse” flash abit yeah? It should b more interactive in my view :slight_smile: Ｉ think the colours r not bad but prehaps u can use more bright colours to liven up the feel of the web.

#4

I would like to thanks you guys for all comment. Actually,I just start to use flash, so I don’t know too much scripts. Thanks you anyway. And I will try more to procuse the quality art work.

#5

Why do the buttons on the left change from page to page? That really isn’t a good idea, and if you are going to use flash I would seriously think about adding transition animations from one area to the next.

#6

Completely agree. Many people have trouble with this, and being so simple, you might as well change it. Overall, the site is nice and compact. Make sure you fix the “Untitled Document” in the title of each page. The graphics need some compression… 80kb is a lot for 1 image if you are trying to sell something (your services.) You are probably out to impress ‘older guys’ who don’t understand the concept of patience.

Navagation between portfolio topics is difficult with the numbers. Add a “next” “back” set of buttons. Also, add something to change “sets” of your work from within each piece and save me from having to return to the main portfolio page.

A final note, I didn’t feel involved. Maybe some text that strings each page together, more like a “Cover Page” on your resume? I don’t know… anyways, lovely work. I hope my comments could help you.

will

#7

the intro sounds oriental and not western. From your resume you sond like a pretty samrt guy. who is that guy delivering packages?

#8

Nice site ,but I don’t like font , do something more with your buttons animate them or something like that now it is a little bit boring.
The idea is very good and the layout looks nice except the buttons.

#9

i don’t agre with with site being too simple. specially for a portfolio site simplicity is key.

i liked the over-all concept and instead of getting caught up with showing-off flash capabilities, your priorities should be design. i went through your site rather quickly and it all seemed well executed except for the side navigation. the type seemed a bit big to me and the color reminded me of websites back in the 90’s. also the regularity and size of the bars at navigation disrrupted the barcode pattern. i would try to blend the navigation better into the barcode.

but, i didn’t look through carefully enough

#10

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