WIP now.
I will listen any your advice here.
For that work the most interested in tone, coloration matching, perspective…
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My art.
Lunatique
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Looks pretty good so far. No egregious problems in the areas you’re asking about.
The one thing you might want to change, is that cliff on the left. Just showing a sliver of it isn’t very good for the composition. Either give it more presence, or only show its base (we can tell it’s a tall cliff from its cast shadow already).
Basically, think about what function that cliff has in your visual narrative and the composition. What is its purpose and does your narrative or composition really need it? If it’s not doing enough to justify its existence right now, then what can you do to give it more purpose?
Your cast shadows aren’t quite consistent. Check their positions relative to the angle of your light source/subject.
The waterfall area feels a bit cramped in the composition. That is probably the most dramatic spot in your scene, but you’ve pushed it all the way to the bottom/right corner. Is the flat plain/river occupying so much precious real estate in your composition more important than that dramatic waterfall? What if you shifted the position of the cliff relative to the background so the waterfall takes up far more space in the scene, turning the entire visual narrative into a more dramatic one? You could also try moving the camera down more, or alter the camera angle a bit.