You should do one with someone talking on his/her cellphone when crossing too. I think its more dangerous.
The composition is as good as it gets. I especially like the subtle use of the SONY “Just enjoy” ad on the truck. It give that irony twist to the scene. The expression on the truck driver face is epic.
I could comment on the modeling, shaders & lighting which I feel can be improve, but I will take nothing from such a good composition.
Many of 3D artist (me include) are guilty of putting all the emphasis on the technical aspec of 3D art but little time on creating a compelling piece of work like you did.
For that, you shall get my vote.