Nice real. But I would remove a bunch of things. plus shorting a few clips.
First I’d fade to black in the first clip. Before to much of the long shot is revealed. It’s a cool shot and nice camera move. But the models looks to cloned.
Take out alot of the creature models. Just leave the female at the end. Maybe leave her face up alittle longer. The female in the end is fare better than any of the other models.
Take out the shot of the table center piece. It’s not a complicated model. Especially compared to the Porsche at the end.