Hi! I’m sort of new in this challenges and very excited to be part of this.
I find this particular story outline very intriguing and somewhat close to me, in my head it has the civil warring and romantic side of Hunger’s Games and the exploration with futuristic technology of Ender’s Game. The couple reminds me very much of Ender and his sister whom was left behind on Earth to become one of the biggest figures in human history. Aw, what a somewhat sad but empowering story! Definitely a great inspiration for me in this challenge.
Here are some thumbs I’ve did -
Instead of setting the scene on Torontokyo, it’s probably going to be Vantokyo. Ha!
Right now I’m leaning towards number 2 but would love to hear what you think!
C&Cs are appreciated!