Master and Servant 3D Entry: Stephen Sherrin


#21

hmmm…in that pose the knees of your char seem to be a bit too round…make the thigh of your char a bit less muscular…only a hint :wink:


#22

Yeah, the legs were bothering me too. I will work on those!


#23

Looking good so far. No critiques yet. Keep it up.


#24

Nice start :slight_smile:

I’d proably just start making small definitions in the forehead area to kinda square it off on the sides a little. Also maybe define some cheeks slight just so he doesnt seem so “round” all over. Oh and a little more definition in the brow area. Other than that…it’s starting out well.

Excellent job on the mouth though…Great TEETH!


#25

the mouth is great. agree with Kid Mesh. it’ll make him look tougher.


#26

Thanks for the input, guys! I cut in more detail. Think I’ll still detail some wrinkling into the lower eyelids, but is this more what you were thinking so far? PS- the character will be wearing a headdress, so I’m not carrying detail further back on the head


#27

I started roughing out the bodshape as well. He will be partialy clothed, so I’m not worrying about detailing the buttocks/groin, which will be covered


#28

Just a rear view of the same


#29

much better. it is’nt clear in the sketch, is he wearing somthing on his head ? again, great mouth, you added this thing under his tongue :thumbsup:


#30

He will be wearing a headdress (I’m not sure the proper term, but think lawrence of arabia


#31

Just added a little detail and did the uv mapping, so Next I’ll tweak the model, add texture, and clothing. Any input would be, as always, appreciated.


#32

Done a little more work… here’s some terxture on the master’s head and the headdress


#33

One more coming…


#34

OK, last angle on the head


#35

I have set up the pose for the master, just need to tweak some verts. Also roughed out the design for his clothes. Any opinions/suggestions?


#36

wow man, he got an impressive left shoulder in that pose…very well modeling:thumbsup:


#37

looks realy good, a real brute. fit to be a master.

good luck on the rest.

jimmy

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=228027&page=1&pp=15


#38

you have some really amzing textures there… And great models as well. me like’ie :thumbsup:


#39

Here’s an approximate layout of the 2 main characters. STill have to do the scene and background characters. ANy critiques suggestions? I appreciate it


#40

Iemand? Alstublieft?