Master and Servant 3D Entry: Peter Elvin

#16

Here\'s the concept of a situation. However, the final scene will be bigger and more complex. You will also see the \‘head parasite\’ in the image.

I tried to get a feel of sorrow, into the image. She do not want to dispose of him.

And that is also kind of the final feel.

the actual master and servant here Is that She Is the Servant to the Fate which has her befallen. And in a double sense, Its also the Parasited who\'s master over the rest of human kind.

Many ways to view it, but thats the way art should be!

Cheers.

#17

:bounce: Hi ! mireneye
:thumbsup: Good idea and concept design. :slight_smile: Hope to see work you coming.:bounce:

#18

Thanks alot!. Actually, the second concept was mostly to get down the situation. I did’nt pay much attention to how the character did look other then how sad the girl is, and how stiff and and unnormal behaviour the recently parasited beeings are.

Im goin to work on the female head model as soon as I get my ass off Zbrush for a while… Im always doin my base meshes in 3dsmax first ;).

Cheers, and good luck to you to.

#19

keep going swedish mate , önskar dig lycka till, min svenska är lika dålig som min engelska.
see you and :thumbsup:

#20

Here is my first Zbrush Texturing pass. I sincerily hope you like it. Since her uncle is one who has been parasited, he is supposed to look alil dried up, and with unusual expressed veins, beacuse of his body is operating on a much higher level then usual.

Thanks for the kind words!
Cheers

#21

Hey man,

Looks like you’ve made a promising start but the first thing I noticed is that the sides of the chin are way out (about a 3 cm readius around that spot). This area needs to be pulled back into the face quite a lot. Doing this should immediately make the head a much more balanced look as the other features are all good.

I hope this helps, good luck in the competition.
Dave.

#22

Hey Peter! nice progress man!
If I may give an opinion, Try to smooth the veins´corner, I think that a soft transition beetwen the veins and the skin will give a better look!:thumbsup:
Keep it up man!!

#23

Veins are supposed to be overly detailed. But your making a point. I think ill smooth them out a tiny bit. Thanks. And Ill see what I can do about the Chin.

Wish me luck!
Ciao

#24

I agree work on the chin a bit make there be some form of noticable change between the lips and the tip of the chin. Otherwise good work on the texturing.

#25

Ok, here is the start on the female head. Surprisingly enough I finished off the Max modelling quite quick this time, only took about 2 houers to get to this. Now its time to make the ears ofcourse ;). Waa, only 47 days left now, I need to hurry up!. Lots to do, so Im off to work some more.

Cheers, and thanks all, im still workin on the ole’ man and his Chin problems!

BTW, I WARN you all ITS FIRST APRIL, Be on your guard!!!

#26

Hi Peter - really good start on your modeling and zbrush adds a lot to it!
Lycka till - kul med ännu en svensk på banan :thumbsup:

#27

Thank you. Yeah, Zbrush is wonderful once you get to know it. Im amazed about the results I can get with it myself. However, my lack of knowlage with the application has put up some issues im going to have to solve. An example would be my lack of knowlage of how to pose up the whole final scene in Zbrush which I normally would do in 3dsmax. However, if all post produsction tricks are allowed, I think I know of a way im going to archive what I want.

Haha, jo har sett en hel del på senaste. Folk har väl insett hur kul D är!
Lucka till själv.

#28

Good luck with your challenge mate. I think that you should have some references and topology research when you are modeling.
Good job so far. You have to make it up…

Good luck :slight_smile:

#29

Hey there. Thx for the comments. I dont rigged anything I directyl modeled everything.

About ur work. I really like the concept . But the comments that the others give are treu. The chin is really to much to the front. And his forehead is a little bit to flat. The women is better but her chin is a little too small, I think hé. You dont have to change it ,but its my opinion

Keep on goiing mate

#30

I know, ive been solving those kinds of issues all day. Thanks for making additional notes on the female head. I agree with that very much.

Thanks.

#31

I think your getting better at the modeling. I notice on the “uncle’s” head there was a strange dip in the eye - nose region that needs some work. Also the area under the lips need to be rounder.
I think it will help the audience with visualizing your idea if you do a simple 3d model layout of what your scene is going to look like. Use simple box-like figures for people substitutes, etc.

I’m glad that you entered this competition! Its a great experience and chance to receive some great critiques and input from the masters. Thats why I entered the competition (I wouldn’t mind winning one of the prizes either).

Best of luck to you.

#32

Yeah, ive been thinking to make one of those. Box and Biped representations. Thank you very much for making some additional critic. I will see what can be done and more importantly what should be done. Remember that her uncle is’nt quite human.

Thanks.

#33

great work on head, waiting for next move, daxs för mig att börja dagens pass.
see you and :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

#34

Thank you. Haha, whilist I cant keep up to your speed ill continue doing my best. Haha, this is my Second female head ever. And I think im doing really good concidering Ive learned what I know myself and from tutorials. And I have time to beacome really good!, still in Swedish Secondary school!. Tack, ska själv uppdatera här så fort jag är klar med ett par till saker.

#35

Allright, here is the scene with the ‘situation’ bare in mind this scene is without the “Master” whom’s servant is the man"uncle" threatend to his parasited life with a gun from his brothers daughter. In a sense, he is a former master to her, he thought her how to use the gun, and how to fight for her life. Now she is uing it to end her masters life so that he can be the servant of a parasite no more.

Cheers.