Excellent. Great to see your progress shots to date. Can’t wait to see that broken heart with the chains and manacles.
Just to give you feedback of my impressions upon seeing your head model progress shots:
Untextured, he looks old. Not senior citizen old, but older than say Keanu Reeves (just as an example). With his strong jaw line and thick neck he looks to me to be heroic. Somebody who’s a heartbreaker rather than the heartbroken:) The neck won’t be an issue of course if you stick with the head on camera angle as in your concept.
Not just with your current wips but as you move along is to consider how much you want to emphasize your main character’s vulnerability and indicate to first time viewers what he’s current strength level is in countering his problem. Does he stand a chance or is he doomed.
Keeping your concept in mind, if the man looks old the anticipated impressions could be: he’s still suffering from loss; he made a poor decision in life (obviously caused by a spouse, lover, whatever) and he’s now paying for it, he’s trapped but there’s some strength left to break free since cracks have appeared on the heavy heart.
If the character is youthful looking (by slimming his features a bit), anticipated impressions could be: he’s madly in love; he’s current relationship is going sour; he’s suffering from rejection; he’s in a love triangle - push and pulled by competing lovers.
If the character is unattractive my initial thoughts could be: he’s having trouble finding love because of his looks; he can only have a relationship with a particular type of person who’s likely the domineering type; he’s obsessed with somebody he’s attracted to but has a problem dealing with it (he’s shy and can’t introduce himself effectively, the “obsession” avoids him or is always unapproachable, etc.)
If he’s attractive: he’s having trouble fending off chicks because of his looks; he’s having problems staying in 1 relationship; perhaps his partner is attractive too but gives him grief…and he’s more interested in the insurance money:twisted:
Just some suggested areas you can fine tune if you wish.