Yeah, animated short would be great indeed 
Master and Servant 3D Entry: Mark Endre Seljan
omer-n
#262
well i think this is a winner, i had and idea with the same subject (smoking)and i dropped it
for something else luckily cause it wouldnt be better that this one. i really like the design of the character and the work u put in is very noticable
good luck 
pigwater
#263
really wonderful tremoside … dof & lights working very well with a intelligent composition
can’t wait to see with textures … great stuff 
Tremoside
#264
conundrum: Thanks a lot! Final is so far…am just around 30% of the whole work…
Climax: Backround will be kept in almost darkness. Maybe some highlight on the backround? You should be right. A don’t know yet.
Virtuoso: Orange glow should be fine, but for first i have to create the cigarette character, maybe some tests after that. Thanks for your comment! Always!
arlutik: Thanks:wavey:
eddieellis: Thank you, but these are just tests now so it’s not a serious lighting.
icedeyes: I really like to use DOF but at this time it was too strenght. Background is too blurry but it’s good right now, coz there are only primitives in model.
Versiden: HHHa short film? Yes, maybe i will put it on to macromedia. two tweens with image scale…that could be a quite short animation…OK am just jokin’ now. What you wrote is honey to me thanks for your kindness :love:
Crying Horn: Yeah
omer-n: You know…winner idea. it’s interesting. I have a print of my machineflesh entry right in front of my desk. When i look at it am always smiling. I see tons of mistakes on it. This feeling is strange. After few years i will also laughing when i look at this entry (master-servant). This is what i call winning. Win over myself and learn to do it better and better. So I have to say these CGTalk challenges are the best to learn how can you learn from the others and from those greatnesses you know.
pigwater: Textures…ok…ok…just time to finish these characters in modeling, but i try to hurry. :buttrock:
Have a nice day/night :wavey:
Tremo
SDIMIS
#266
Beutiful character,texturing, lighting! Very unique.I agree with your idea to show a little more enviromen and not to be a closed frame as you have design it in the begining.I will give and “advice” for the rest of the composition.Since your main character’s part is very strong inside the scene,follow the rule of simplicity for the rest of the scene.This way the eyes can focus on the main character.To many details in the background can take away from the model’s dynamic,in my opinion.
Great job!
sgabe
#269
Hey Little Fellow! Good to see you here! It’s a very good idea, and the graphic is amazing too! I am curious to know how can you do this thing.?! :eek: Still no serious textures, still no PuGirl and environment?..It’s very cool right now!
So just keep it up man! :buttrock: Have a nice day/night!
aliasali
#271
Hmm,Great poses and expressions with ur character,Nice eye controlling with ur composition.
its very good…keep it up,mate:thumbsup:
Gunilla
#272
Wow! some wonderful updates here. I’m just joining in with others and wish for an animation … would be really cool. I really like Odon :love:
suk-grigorij
#273
Impressed with the lightning. Hey, it’s not as bad as you trying to tell. I’m a smoker. But your image is doesn’t causing me to do anything about it. I gues you didn’t try to put any propagande here. Just a small story of one person. Well you are doing pretty good for now.
my thread http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=224891
Deadlyforce
#275
Cool posing here Tremo !
the expression is very well rendered and the path of light through the picture is fine !
I would love to, but I have no crits so far…
Cya ! :buttrock:
Tremoside
#276
DimitrisLiatsos: Thank you man! I’ve checked your thread and seen that beautiful chick are you working on… Rock on mate!! Animation again…Maybe for a demo reel…few years…i have to learn a lot…
S.DIMIS: Yes, you’re right. Your advice is correct. Only thing from my side: in my experience I know that all the pixels are important. Our brain is very intelligent our eyes are not. Sometimes you can see any important on an images backround but your brain gets information from that. Little things, just patches or colors, but your brain can understand those coz of the cognitive functions of it. So I don’t want to show an overcrowded backround (just as your advice) but I will try to make the needful details. Perhaps on the final those will be just “coloured pixels” but somehow deep inside the viewer’s mind can analyze them and get useful information about Odon and his feelings at the moment. Thanks again!
d-tox: Thanks, but why of course? Sounds good and your words give me lots of support but there are lots of very-very talented persons in this challenge and in the community. And i drop my jaws daily how weak are my skills…
safe05: Thanks a lot! :wavey:
hadi_moom:THX!!
Madlight_1988: :bowdown: You’re too kind!
Gunilla: Nice to see you here again. Animation…just as i wrote…maybe…few years…few skills…perhaps in a demo reel.
suk-grigorij: Thanks! So it’s important to avoid a propaganda image. I have some quite bad experiences with illness, smoking et cetera…one of my ears is deaf and i had four serious operations with that…i know what is pain and to be depressed by health problems. So I try to do not disturbing people with a propaganda. Maybe they can think about the situation…if they will that’s enough. Things starting with small thoughts. Welcome on my thread.
smaddl: Thanks a lot!
Have a nice day/night to everyone :wavey:
Tremo
3dRaven
#277
I’m gone for three days and BAM… love his expression on the new update…although the scenes seems a bit dark at the moment…maybe crank up the indirect illumination a bit…we wanna see the PU Girl in the final with nice details :D… The DOF adds a nice touch makes it look wacky and real at the same time
bealobo
#278
wow! I´m new here, but I´m very pleased to have reached this thread.
You´re doing a great job there! And so fast…
Keep it up!