hey, wintemute! THat’s a great concept there. but i think you can definitely improve your idea and execution. FOr me, instead of two big monitors staring back at him, i could add hands to the monitors, seemingly trying to push him into the pc world. The monitors could be drawn like a mouth too, like the pc trying to “eat” him in!
Wel, just a little idea. But you could definitely improve this concept your trying to convey.
Good luck.
Keep it up. I’m looking forward to this piece.






