Master and Servant 3D Entry: HADI POORKERMAN

#6

girl face on detail !

#7

young man on the cage !

#8

this is the colored version of my sketch .
i use photoshop for this level .

#9

hmm,good sketeches,but havnt u missed the subject of the challenge,or im wrong and i myself cant find the relationship?
keep going:thumbsup:

#10

thanks for your advises ;

:shrug: I like quiet stuff !
My idea :

the girl playing harp doleful and crying (she is frustration because she is alone) . cause of she’s playing , the man on the cage is sad , the rose is sear , the bird is disquiet and the candle is crying for all (he has a face) .
BUT in shaddow it is else . shaddow show us that the girl is not alone .(shaddow is not the dream of girl). and servants have not choice .

[b]the [color=orange]grief is the master and the others is servant ! but shadows are free !!
i trying to complete my idea soon .

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and dear newt , you are right . i have not enough accuracy to my skatch because is too late !
and my 3d scene will be deffrent alot .

now please tell me what is your impression for my idea ?

:thumbsup: .

excuse me for my bad english !

:shrug:

#11

hi
i see u has joined to this chalenge
you are welcome
wish the best for you(i typed best=bed wrongly, sorry;) )
and i will follow this one too
i think what is most important in your scence is lighting.
think a lot about it
bye

#12

I like your sketchs, buI don´t undestand your idea … Who is the master and who is the server? Is the shadow in the wall a memorie of the woman? And who is under the “bird jail” (I don´t know how to write the right name :scream: ) Is that man with the rose? They are servants of the wishes and memories, that´s it?

#13

ya sure my friend . modeling and lighting both are realy important .
thankx for your advise .
goodluck !

:slight_smile:

#14

I suggest u move the candle a bit to improve composition.

Good luck anyways!

#15

thanks for your advises ;

:shrug: I like quiet stuff !
My idea :

the girl playing harp doleful and crying (she is frustration because she is alone) . cause of she’s playing , the man on the cage is sad , the rose is sear , the bird is disquiet and the candle is crying for all (he has a face) .
BUT in shaddow it is else . shaddow show us that the girl is not alone .( shaddow is not the dream of girl ). and servants have not other choices . thay are sadly .

the [color=orange]grief is the master and the others is servant ! [/color]
but shadows are [color=lime]free !![/color]

i trying to complete my idea soon .

and dear newt , you are right . i have not enough accuracy to my skatch because is too late !
and my 3d scene will be deffrent alot .

now please tell me what is your impression for my idea ?

:thumbsup: .

#16

i begin modeling without any resources . i use a mirror for modeling face and use the character studio female skeleton as my girls’s body anatomy resource .

#17

i making body . i append details the end level .

#18

now i almost finished her body . i appending details in end .

#19

i start modeling her cloth by make a copy of her body and deform this to cloth . for her warparound i draw two spline as path and shape and loft this .then deform this to thing was my idea .

#20

wire

#21

wip

#22

thanks for your advises ;

:shrug: I like quiet stuff !
My idea :

the girl playing harp doleful and crying (she is frustration because she is alone) . cause of she’s playing , the man on the cage is sad , the rose is sear , the bird is disquiet and the candle is crying for all (he has a face) .
BUT in shaddow it is else . shaddow show us that the girl is not alone .( shaddow is not the dream of girl ). and servants have not other choices . thay are sadly .

the [color=orange]grief is the master and the others is servant ! [/color]
but shadows are [color=lime]free !![/color]

i trying to complete my concept soon .

#23

see below .

#24

i append afew deatil on the cloth as i wish .

#25

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