Hello Dim!
Thanks for your kind words, since i’m great fan of your work and skills it touch me a lot so
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Updates are as interessing technicaly as great artistically :bounce:
The comp is cool that way. BUT ! I humbly think that her left arm should go more in her back, just as she would fall back and use it to stop her fall (excuse my poor english). Plus you’ll get a diagonal direction from left hand -->shoulder -->head of mina --> right arm/hand ------> Ares
no?
well depends of a lot of things, first the purpose of the feeling of unstability you want to give her…?
and i know you are not yet on the illumination, but maybe you’ll might use the back ray of light to illuminate points of the comp, kind of backlight, like Ares head and armory, Mina right hand, shoulders, hips and head…? suggestions only 
good continuation 
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