Master and Servant 3D Entry: David Allshouse

#28

Just a quick update.

You’re right my characture style will suit this image more.:wink:

#29

Just more progress…things are coming together quite quickly so far.

#30

Hey, I like this concept better than the fast food one. Great start on the modeling. :smiley:

#31

Here’s a rough draft of the comp I’ll be using. About 30% complete lots of tweaking to do need to add emotion to puppeteers faces and more details like strings and other things. Also working on a detailed desciption of the piece.

#32

Great new concept, cool

#33

Hey altebanger, great directions this is heading in, it made me laugh when I first saw your last shot! Well done mate:thumbsup:

#34

Thanks guys I love the new Idea as well, glad you do too.

Miketche:Ya, fast food was too narrow a topic so I chose the new one.

DaddyMack: I find the irony of such a serious thing funny as well. Since I’m such a newb still this is pushing my skills to the limit and cartoony is about all I can do right now.

HandleBar: What I wouldn’t give to have your modeling skills right now. Your ability to characture is awe inspireing.

I’m gonna give Bush and Osama that goofy look you see on a kid totaly involved in a video game or something to that effect.

As for lighting I was gonna have a three teered image with flames behind the big red guy but I like the lighting I put at the bottom so your eye is drawn to the stage then to whats behind the scenes. Just a thought.

#35

Puppets…a true master and servant situation…Fun entry,and lots done already…I agree that emotions/expressions will play a huge part in this as they will in all enties…This last concept is a good choice…Keep the work moving david…:thumbsup:

#36

Made a few changes to the lighting setup and tweaking the models and such.

Thank you everyone foe viewing and your comments.

#37

Some fun ideas here david…and all starting to come together real well…lots done…doing well david…keep it coming…:arteest:

#38

Interesting (and possibly very volatile) ideas here - looking forward to the final scene :slight_smile:

/Anders

#39

Trying to see if I could draw in the strings in PS but it don’t look very convincing and my memory is getting low lol. I have a plan though…the only problem is how to catch the shadows just right on the background image.

#40

Virtuoso: Thank you for all your kind words it’s nice having a Pro take intrest in what my rookie self can do.

Cartesius: Yes I’m pushing the envelope with this Idea. I’m not trying to offend anyone or trample on their beliefs, but I understand how this will ruffle a few feathers. I wil be giving a narative shortly about the piece just gotta find the right words.

#41

Love the devil!

Keep em comin :thumbsup:

#42

Almost done just need to take a break then come back and tweak it to make it even better than it is. Any and all thoughts and comments welcome.

#43

wow :thumbsup: excellent progress and wonderful results … :bounce:
jdd

#44

Hi david…I like the softer tones you have gone for…I would bring in the little puppets more to the center…keep things more off balanced…they are too lined up now…from top to bottom…I think a bit of off balanced characters would be a better line to follow with the eye…Just a taste thing…another set of eyes for you…up to you…either way…keep working hard…:arteest:

#45

Hahah, lookin great. Lots of time to polish it up and get it looking perfect. cheers

#46

thanks Jdog,Virtuoso, and Soapy :slight_smile: Yup plenty of time to tweak.

Virtuoso: Bringing them closer will make the focal point stronger thank you for pointing that out!!

#47

Wow Altbanger, this is so cool. I really like the style of your characters, its all coming together wonderfully. Well done.