Master and Servant 2D Entry: Vinícius de Sá Menezes

#41

Nice drawing!. I like the woman character a lot. shes very pretty! great so far keep it up!

#42

good concept and nice line art, i wait the colors, no crits for the moment. Good work:thumbsup:

#43

Wow… very impressive. I like everything on it. Reads well and to the point!:thumbsup:
Keep up the pace…
Cheerz

Tom

#44

Hi, Very good blow of pencil here, you would have can be to increase
page-setting, good luck for the continuation. :thumbsup:

#45

Great sketch… i really like her expression!

She could probably do with a bigger bunch of flowers…? Or less flowers but bigger individual flowers…? The individual flowers look a bit small.

#46

MAN id hate tobe an usher at that wedding its like… “are u a friend of the bride or the groom… GRAAAWL …i see .u r seated on the left”:smiley: looks fantastic man

#47

the last piece should be the best among all~!does the head of the dragon needs to be cropped?just a thought though:)keep up the good job bloodtester

#48

She is HOT! evil or not… Great drawing! I liked the previous one too. Is his face going to be inside the image? I would consider having it look longingly/lustfuly towards his bride.

#49

Hey, guys, what feed back!

Jose Pardo: Thanks! the face of the monster is to going to be inside of the image, all be clear in the next updates:thumbsup:

ms@zx: thank you, the dragon face its not be crooped.

nebezial: hahaha, lol :smiley: thanks dude!

duddlebug: thanks for the tip, :thumbsup: !

Tranchefeux: thx a lot!

Tommy Lee: Hey, tommy, I’m glad you liked!

MDN67: tnhx!

keko: thanks!

Tremoside: Hi, Tremoside, nice see you again!! thanks and good luck!

Jose Prado: Thanks for the feedback!

#50

This a little change in the concept.
The bride is a demon…that transform your fiancé into a “slave monster” for all the eternity. :slight_smile:
there is a little update on the monster…still working on it. For the back, I wondering put some members of the family ( if some scary expressions on their faces, of course!) lol :stuck_out_tongue:
comments?

#51

My, aren’t they the happy couple. I like how you do muscles, and your overall style. Must see how you finish this, I must.

#52

thats a cool rockin sketch man:buttrock:, goodlux! look forward to ur color progress :thumbsup:

#53

Good work so far, BloodTaster. The attitude of the bride in your latest shot is the best one yet. Are you still considering guests and whatnot in the background? What about a trio of creepy bridesmaids in matching outfits? One comment on the bride, though: She seems a bit short. I don’t know if her knees are bent underneath her dress, but right now she only looks 5 or 5-and-a-half heads tall. Maybe just shrinking her head could help, or lengthening the dress area? Anyhow, just ideas…

And this may be none of my business, but as you’re the one making the strong statement, I’m just really curious… Are you, by chance, married? :slight_smile:

-mike

#54

walrus:Thanks for the tip! I just fix that, you see on the next update:thumbsup: .
And about your question… hahaha, No, I’m not married:shrug:

eclipson and Bishoppess of Death: Thanks for the support!

#55

Yeah, walrus has a point there. Anyhow,… way to go!:thumbsup:

#56

A closeup on the final lineart. On the corner, a composition study (using a photo). that’s a have in mind for the picture. Comments?

#57

Some color studies :confused:

#58

Wow, the new update looks great, I really like the new position of the creatures head.

I also like the look on the creatures face, like it is unsure whether the "bride’ is going to softly caress its chin or plunge her fingers into the soft spot under its jaw.

It might be worthwile to mess around with where the creatures eyeball is looking, I like it now, but it might be cool to have the head in the exact position as now but the eyeball looking back towards the bride. Like how dogs when being scolded will turn their head away from you but stiil keep a nervous eye on you from the corner of their eye.

Anyway your making great progress, look forward to the next update.

#59

Beautiful color tones! Very French “bande dessine” style, which I like a lot. The glows and hilights on the skin are just superb.

I do have to say that with the bright purple, she no longer comes off to me as a bride, but that may be something that will be hard to achieve with universal (well, global) comprehension. In my country, white is the color for brides to wear. In China, I believe, it’s red. So you’ll never get a color that reads “right” everywhere, and I have no good solution for you. Likely, you’ve got the right one now: Give her a bouquet and stick her in a church and let the setting speak. Have you thought about putting a cummerbund on the monster? :slight_smile:

-mike

#60

You have a great stile, Man! I love much of your characters…!

I’ll waiting for the next step.

cheers: Kornél