Master and Servant 2D Entry: Vinícius de Sá Menezes

#58

Wow, the new update looks great, I really like the new position of the creatures head.

I also like the look on the creatures face, like it is unsure whether the "bride’ is going to softly caress its chin or plunge her fingers into the soft spot under its jaw.

It might be worthwile to mess around with where the creatures eyeball is looking, I like it now, but it might be cool to have the head in the exact position as now but the eyeball looking back towards the bride. Like how dogs when being scolded will turn their head away from you but stiil keep a nervous eye on you from the corner of their eye.

Anyway your making great progress, look forward to the next update.

#59

Beautiful color tones! Very French “bande dessine” style, which I like a lot. The glows and hilights on the skin are just superb.

I do have to say that with the bright purple, she no longer comes off to me as a bride, but that may be something that will be hard to achieve with universal (well, global) comprehension. In my country, white is the color for brides to wear. In China, I believe, it’s red. So you’ll never get a color that reads “right” everywhere, and I have no good solution for you. Likely, you’ve got the right one now: Give her a bouquet and stick her in a church and let the setting speak. Have you thought about putting a cummerbund on the monster? :slight_smile:

-mike

#60

You have a great stile, Man! I love much of your characters…!

I’ll waiting for the next step.

cheers: Kornél

#61

Sweet color study ! I actually love the picture you had of the reptile creature facing sideways than how it’s facing now. It just seems to look better to me because the creature looks more threatening and much bigger in comparison to the bulging eye verse thats facing at an angle. But i dont know, they are all very good to be honest, and I love your color work and line work. Tell me, do you plan on painting above the line art layer aswell ?

#62

mete brasa que tá ficando gostosa! :slight_smile:
e puxa as orelhas do PC, pois tu esta mais perto que eu!
abraço!

#63

Ah! this looks good! ( the final lineart ) i’m sorry…:rolleyes: but i’m gonna have to subscribe to this…

#64

Great work, it looking really awesome. :thumbsup:

#65

Great pic, I like the coloring of the bride, she has an innocent looking Alyson Hannigan quality.

#66

stunning style! i love your colors.
quero ver mais hein!? to de olho aki
flw

#67

I like the image composition that your’re going for. You may want to thin down the meat behind her breast though, so that she looks slimmer. Just my 2 cents.

#68

exquisite! :thumbsup: from scketch to color tests…loving it

#69

I really like your piece…the creature is pretty cool, but I really dig your woman…she has a very strong presence. Your color test looks nice too, but I hope your keeping the expression from the lineart? I really liked that no-nonsense, kickass look she had :slight_smile:

#70

AWWW such a cute, innocent face … maybe TOO innocent whats that u got there little girl…EEEEEKK ARRRGGHH!! gnaw gnaw…:smiley: love the colour layout man!!

#71

i agree with the innocent part…but it has something going on inside her head, you can see it. great expression, and also great colour study…aaand i really like your avatar!!:smiley:

#72

Hey,

Just a question really…possibly a crit, I don’t know… I’m wondering why you chose the egyptian Ankh as the symbol on the bride’s choker. I am familiar with the symbolism and the meaning behind it, but I’m not sure how you are incorporating it into this piece?

Not sure if it matters because intent is a lot of what goes into art…not trying to get picky here, I really like what you are doing with this piece. I was just curious about that symbol because it stands out in the painting.

Thanks,
~Ela~

#73

Nice lineart, very sexy! I like her wicked/naughty look in the final lineart study! Parabéns e continua o bom trabalho!

#74

This is looking really nice. I’d just say careful with the muscles, dont make them too big, that way you get more of a contrast between the beasty and the girl.
Otherwise this is looking good.

#75

Wow, how much feedback!
Well, I not entire satisfaid with this pic, so I spent the last 2 days, testing new compositions and other stuffs… but…nothing seems to fit, until now:sad: …maybe I should take a break or something…

ANARKY: yeah, this muscles…I’ll pay attention on that.

Elaeria: about the Ankh, if you know the meaning, its related to the fact: the bride transform your fiancé into a slave… for all eternity…immortality aspect.:thumbsup:

Thanks for all comments, I really enjoy! And I rope come back soon…with some update:shrug:

#76

Nothing… No, nothing to crit !:sad:

You’re doing a fantastic piece.:bounce:

Can’t wait to see how you’ll paint the monster

Snail

#77

dae vinicius! ta ficando A N I M A L :buttrock: :applause:
curti a mudanca da cobra pra esse bixao loko ai!! manda ve que vai fica duca!
abração!!