Master and Servant 2D Entry: Simon Chataway

#8

Character design for the boy…

#9

wow great artwork so far. that kids cool and i can see shes going to be hot too :slight_smile: is the kid going to have a catpult in his pocket? maybe with one hand fighting the other hand, from getting it out of his pocket?
i like the scene outside but with the teacher with the blue skirt :slight_smile:

#10

heres the teacher in all its roughness… im trying to figure out the base colours for her clothes and that… tell me what you think!

#11

nice stuff ! man, that boy looks he’s suffered some!

#12

yeah, his consience is ripping out of his body so i guess hes suffering a great amount of trauma :stuck_out_tongue: thanks Squibbit! I love your concepts, youve got a crazy imagination.

Cheers digiscape, his bad consience is going to be armed with the catapult, i originally was going to have him fighting for it with the boy himself but didnt.

#13

I gues you could call this line are WIP, im kind of putting everything in its place, then gradually refining it and detailing it…

#14

cranking it out. Blocked in an outdoor background, I want to change the style of the teacher to suit the other characters. Theres going to be a good conciense as well, and im gonna try and make it more obvious that they ARE his little conciense characters controlling him(the boy)… if that makes sense… any ideas?

#15

looks gud to me!

#16

cranking it out. Blocked in an outdoor background, I want to change the style of the teacher to suit the other characters. Theres going to be a good conciense as well, and im gonna try and make it more obvious that they ARE his little conciense characters controlling him(the boy)… if that makes sense… any ideas?

Hiya Mr eupee :slight_smile:

Great idea with the conciense charactors. Maybe there evil conciense could have a redish glow and the good conciense could have a blueish glow. They could also be slightly transparent. The evil one pose looks great and maybe the good one could be jumping up on his back trying to stop the bad one…just some thoughts. Wish I had teachers that looked like that when I was at school…hehe

GO ADELAIDE!! lol

#17

hah, yeah same… i only finished school a few years ago… yeah i was thinking about the tranparency for the consience, but that glow sounds good, i was going to make blur lines coming out of the boy, but we will see… thanks element, you got good ideas.

#18

great work, only in the last sketch i thought that it was another boy on his head, earlier ones defined the concept more clearly:thumbsup:

#19

Hmm i like this idea- funny and great at the same time. Thou you should put smaller horns onto the devil-bys forhead…

MY MASTER & SERVANT 2d

#20

ive added some horns, tail and a good consience. subtle changes here and there, slowly cleaning up the whole piece as i go along… i might start working on the background then creating some more prominant highlights and shadows. I was toying with the idea of the devil having a shiethed pitch fork and the good consience having wings, but il see about that. Im not sure if its obvious enough that the characters are his consience and i think the attempt to make the good consience midway coming out the boys body has failed.

#21

i wud like to grab it rather than…

anyway,great piece,looking foward to more!

#22

ha, cheers. thanks guys for opinions, im working on the background now.

#23

neatening up background and other bits. still trying to keep it bold and simple… il add light detail soon, and keeep working on the picture as a whole, i detail things when i get to them.

#24

I love the whole idea about being master and servant to your self. WONDERFUL!
But, I dont mean to be crude, but the brick wall makes an interesting tangent with the guys “area”. Even the color of the bricks imply that. And whole situation with the pretty lady.

It’s an easy fix, and I love the concept.

#25

Heh heh! This is fun! The devil and angel inside of you thing is an excellent idea for this challenge theme. One idea… what is she doing? She looks like she’s almost waiting for the attack. Perhaps a magazine or a textbook on the table in front of her… And I agree with frak3 :slight_smile: Perhaps change the colour of the bricks between the boy and the teacher! Lol!

#26

Haha, yeah i see that now… i think i might change that now. thanks heaps frak3.

Cheers Poshspice, im definately taking pointers from you about drawing chicks man, your the king at it! Im going to put something there for the teacher to look at, but not sure what yeat, origially she was bending over to talk to other kids, but the composition was all messed.

Thanks guys, il update soon.

#27

haha oh man,great piece,looking foward to the details.

oh and thanks for joining my forum too.:thumbsup: