THE Wizard, dunkelgold - Thanks for the comments! I took everyoneās (and I mean everyoneās) advice and fixed the perspective to what extent I could.
Now I just have to figure out what to do to the man in the back- the composition looks odd now imo, and thereās too much empty space to the top-left. Maybe Iāll just use fancy cloud work there. Suggestions?
lookin good so far. When you say youāll add a cloud in the top left - perhaps you could have some servere weather effect involving electrical storms, with bolts of lighteneing emulating from the main charcter. The sky would also look awsome if you added servere perspective, echoing the line of the cityā¦ Iām getting carried away now, but you get the idea? Keep it up, should be a good one
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Thatās spiff-tastic ! I do agree with m477, about the ecetric storm cloudsā¦would add a nice effect! But anyway looking good thus far! Dont stop !
Hi sidchagan.
Looks good man. It eminds me of AIās android city. Theme is also good even if littlebit too dramatic loverstale for my taste 
but good work with concep GL&Ht and sketches. GL&HF
Ugh, sorry for the incredibly slow updates. College workās driving me insane, so I havent had more than an hour to work on this in the last few days. As a result, this isnt much of an update- just showing how the lines are coming.
The sky wont be as dark in the final, this is just a template against which to draw the clouds.
Started working on the clouds. This isnāt what the final background will look like obviously- Iāll decrease the opacity on this cloud layer later on, as well as add some background features in the sky, before doing the real cloudwork on top. This is just to give an idea of what the cloud layout might look like.
Any ideas on this?
I like the conceptā¦amost did something similar. Have to agree about the angle comments, seems a little too much. Maybe rotate it to the right towards horizontal a tad. What about adding a slight fish eye lens efffect to the city? Too much?? OMO :hmm:
More work on the clouds. I added some background (which is very faintly visible, if at all), and as I said Iād do, decreased the opacity on the first cloud layer. The clouds will stay like this until Iāve added some lighting, which is some way off.
Cameron Gardner: Thanks for the comment :). I fixed the perspective to what extent I could before (it was even more extreme in the concept stage), but any more and Iāll have to modify too much, so I wont be able to make it more horizontal- I dont even know if Iāll finish it in time as it is :P.
Also, Iām not really sure what a fish eye effect isā¦
I like the changes that you made to the perspective. Itās looking much better. As for the angle of the city it sounds like youāve finalized thatā¦ Aside from that Iād be concerned about all the āweightā in the picture being in the botton left. Itās almost as if everything is going to slide off the side. Perhaps some larger buildings on the right side would balance it out more.
All that asideā¦ good work on the cloud layer thus far. Itās looking like the lighting is going to be very dramatic.
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A very intresting concept and a sort of āTronā like aprouchā¦ without all the neon lights though.
You are still yet working on it. But I would really lover to see it with the bridge with more elements in it revealing how such bridges are constructed. It just seemed as if it would add so much more!
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Layout of what colors the building lights will likely be. Dont worry, the final wont look like this! Still gotta draw the building structures on top, then do more lighting and.
Iām unlikely to finish this drawing in time, thanks to my upcoming exams. Iāll probably be uploading another concept drawing soon, in case I decide I dont want to go ahead with this one (the buildings are painfully boring to draw).
YEESH! Sorry for being idle so long, had tons of school work, so I didnt get a chance to work on the drawing. Plus, I needed a break from the buildings.
I worked on the buildings on the right a little, rather proud of the green one, as strange as it turned out. Any opinions on it?
I might post a close up of the buildings I just worked on later.
More coloring WIP for the buildings. Only added one (the ugly brown one in front, but its different from the others so I figured Iād post it.
A closeup of the Technomancerās head. I might need to smoothen the lines a bit, lets see how it turns out.
Iām deliberately leaving it without eyes, but if anyone thinks it should be otherwise, be sure to tell me.
a couple of things:
the chest muscle should go into the shoulder bit. now it seems to go to the armpit. the hands are great though.
the back of the head needs slight adjustment. near the ears part.
you might want to use a flipped version of your city on the water. you can use it just for reference if you like.
lights on the buildings would be more interesting if they were more irregular in size, shape and color.
well. these things might just be me. cheeeeers!
More progress on the Technomancer. There are more lines to add to his hand, and I still have to finish his torso. Anything of note?
Sorry for the severely reduced image quality, I should probably have saved it as at 50% actual size, rather than 75%/
Ha, looking cool, the sky is much better and Iām feeling the wireframe characterā¦
The eyes, oh yes it needs eyesā¦ The windows into a characterās soul and all that. Not normal eyes but the source of some electric lightening perhaps?? now that would be very cool, and would link the character into the scene, and could also form the origin of his wirey frameā¦ Leave you to think about it,
Hope you find time to get it all done :wip:
