first off let me just say that i like your style…very old school soft and lush…
now im gonna ctrit the hell out of your work as if you were my painting student so please excuse…oh and i cant be bothered with spelling as i have a massive hangover…lol
first off i cant really get any feeling of emotion comming from the work…the story that you have posted is a very good idea and will make a great piece…but in the picture i get no feeling of that story…imagine that we are doing a post-modern crit where the viewer makes the story…what will they think? what feeling does the viewer take from the image…? every picture tells a story…but what do you want to say?
next i come to earth…do you really need the mask? i think it isnt really needed. in a very realistic picture you might want to think a little more on the practiacl side…i really cant see why the mask is there at all except just for show…why would earth wear a mask? and if she did what would it look like?
also earths proportions are a little off…her legs are very long compared to the other girl…
both look cool but they seem a little mismatched in proportion ans perspective…
ok one more crit…
something i always tell poeple when im teaching painting…dont be scared to go dark…squint you eves and see how the picture looks…at the moment its pretty washed out and has no sense of depth…use tone to set the position of earth and the girl into the picture…also the backgroung is just as important as the figures…why is it being left to last?
anyway…its comming along great…im looking forward to seening it in the end…
sorry for sounding harsh but i thought you might like something more than a “awesome” comment…
cheers…cyb