Master and Servant 2D Entry: jeremy jobin


#1

jeremy jobin has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

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Latest Update: Line Art: line art

with time quickly running out i am forced to go with this idea. now i have to somehow balance school with rendering this image…should be a couple of busy weeks. check back when i start to add colour. the input received from the community is very helpful.


#2

a quick sketch i did so it feels like im actually participating in the contest. it needs a lot of work but i think there is some potential. the idea is to show a look of terror on the face of the creature in the foreground being dragged away, while the other creatures look on in fear awaiting their turns with the master…


#3

hi.

great start!! lets see some more.
chris.


#4

i found a little time this week to actually work on my idea, i would greatly appreciate some feedback or suggestions, as i seem to keep redrawing the same thing over and over…i know there is a lot still to do, especially getting good reference for my master, right now she has a nose like a boxer!


#5

did you try to work with a higher res, that will allow ou to refine those details…cool concept. love the servant’s expression…keep it up…:thumbsup:


#6

This is a very emotive concept, I like the fact that the slaves’ features could be interpreted as evil (the horns and everything) and their eyes are very innocent looking.


#7

wow, finally some feedback! thanks for taking the time to view my work and post something.
i thought it might be fun to have these evil little creatures terrified of the innocent looking woman on the bed…i feel the scene needs more chains hanging from the ceiling, bed posts etc. maybe some hanging in the foreground so they appear larger like the slave. what do you think? i will probably redraw the image again to refine it some more, and suggestions always help!


#8

Hey, cool concept. The leather, whips, and chain queen, MUAHAHAHA. kinda kinky.
i’ll be checking for more updates. Kepp it coming.

cheers,
Archie


#9

I think the perspective and the angle make this an eye-catching piece. It’s a great story and it’s drawn really well. As far as the reference for your female I must say that there is no standard so I like this nose for what it’s worth.


#10

hmmm. objects at the farthest distance should have the greatest forshortening. your master lady could be forshortened as well. like the hands perhaps in relation to the body?

the bedpoles can be tilted too a bit to enhance perspective. it is a worms-eyeview shot.

keep on going maaan. cheeers.


#11

i re-drew my idea out again making some of the changes that were suggested, i dont know if i even like this idea anymore, im getting sick of looking at it. maybe i’ll post some more concepts later on. until then please continue to leave feedback.


#12

with time quickly running out i am forced to go with this idea. now i have to somehow balance school with rendering this image…should be a couple of busy weeks. check back when i start to add colour. the input received from the community is very helpful.


#13

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