Master and Servant 2D Entry: Gabe torrez

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Gabe torrez has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

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Latest Update: Line Art: Final clothing

So this is my final out come for the clothing.

#2

welcome gabe, and good luck:thumbsup:

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first sketch, just to generate some ideas.

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Hi all, Here IÂ’m just defining my character pose and clothing.

#5

Variant in clothing…

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Variant in clothing…

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ariant in clothing…

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Variant in clothing…

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Variant in clothing…

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Looking good, I like the pose and the style of clothing. One thing I noticed is that her calves look too thick, even if they are pressed up against something they still look a little too wide. I hope this helps. Keep up the good work man!

Also, I just noticed that her left ankle looks broken, I know these are just quick sketches but I figured I’d point that out anyway.

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So this is my final out come for the clothing.

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I think shes too thick in some areas, mainly her torso.

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I like the way you ahve gone through a variation of ideas before selection fo your final choice…shows the serious thought you are putting into this… About the main concept, it would be really good if you could tell us what the concept is all about…Right now i have only a very vague idea…

The ankle is a part indeed which needs serious looking into… it looks diff from the rest of the drawing, as its a bit cartoonish…but alls looking neat and good…looking forward to your updates ,
love,
Vinesh

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Thanks for the reply, yah there are some areas of her I’m still trying massage in to focus…

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