Master and Servant 2D Entry: Bruno Werneck Galano Vieira

#5

I like this last layout, but the youth power would be tough to convey. Not really important what it does, come to think of it. It’s just important to convey that he has it, the women want it, and show what they will do to get it. Then you’ve got your master/servant relationship.

BTW, the girl in the foreground seems wasted as a puppet on strings. If walking toward the “camera”, you can show her as a satisfied customer, a stoned out zombie or a disgusted individual who can’t be tempted. Maybe she’s tempting the viewer instead. . .

Just wanted to throw out some ideas. Good luck!

#6

some good point(s) there…

Thanks

#7

Hi, my friend!
All woman slaves look like they are equally treated by the master.
It would be interesting, just pick one or two woman and give them some special relationship with the master. Right now, even though front woman has big portion of painting, she looks small. I guess she doesn’t show any better relation with the master than others have.
Keep it up!
Go Bruno!

#8

thanks Tae. I already changed the layout of my piece – again! :wink: –

I got rid of the foreground girl, as you guys suggested…
I’ll post it some time tomorrow…

#9

Bruno
Hey, it’s Mo. I’ve entered the Challenge myself. Very excited but trying to seem cool, you know. Anyway, please come see my stuff sometime. No one seems to want to leave any comment, and I’m feeling lonely… Check back with you later.

#10

rough concept idea for the ‘mystical pimp’. He won’t be sitting anymore. this way he takes up more room in the final piece. This is a character / relationship based contest, I’ll worry about the background later…

if you got any comments or feedback, feel free…

#11

is that a 24 karat gold nipple earing?:slight_smile: He he he, Focus on the chicks dude;)

My MaSteR&ServAnT 2D

#12

hahaha… soon my friend, soon… I will get to girls. that will be the fun part…

thanks man :slight_smile:

#13

Come on! Bruno!
I am waiting for it.

#14

This is it. It’s decided…

I might add something on the foreground. But overall I like the way this is heading… I gotta move on anyway…next thing you know the contest is over…

cheers,

#15

nice start :slight_smile: good luck

#16

the last concept is great, but what if you have the foreground woman turn her neck but the back is slightly toward the audience, just a thought…I love the colour scheme and the expressions…

#17

This is what I’ve done today. (aside from vaccoing my hole apartment…) I’m posting the coloring WIP right after that.

This is the extent of my ‘line art’ . I like to keep the drawing loose. Plus, most of my decison making happens while painting.

Usually it bytes on the foot though, as I end up having to print what I have on the computer and draw over and fix things by hand…

#18

oops! had some techinical problems
yesterday…and I forgot to comment on what I added (on the line art submission): the girls raising off the floor.

I’m not sure yet, but I think I might add this girl either being punished or being raised from inside the pimp’s dark cape. Maybe te end of his cape moves / looks like water or oil… and that’s where he keeps his girls, in this this dimension inside his cape.

something like that…just going with the flow I guess…

#19

I like this concept, the facial expression is very clear, yet you need more drama, beautiful colors and poses…

#20

you’re right. I’m working on it… I did turn her back like you suggested… I’m hoping as I continue to work on it, I’ll finally warm to it and come out with something super dynamic / dramatic…

thanks

#21

Thanks for visiting my thread and giving advice:)

Just one thought about your picture. I find your post #14 more dynamic.:shrug:

Maybe te end of his cape moves / looks like water or oil… and that’s where he keeps his girls, in this this dimension inside his cape. Some kind of oil with iridescence ? Just a suggestion, of course

[size=2]Anyway nice start. Looking forward to see more:thumbsup:
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#22

mad skills. Keep it comin bruno.

#23

I lowered the angle of the camera so it’s more dynamic.

those 2 girls on the foreground would be coming out of the pimp’s cape…

that’s all I got so far, specially since I changed the angle, I won’t be able to use what I painted before…that’s too bad… I like the girl on shorts…

#24

man… it’s been so hectic on the weekends (but in a good way). I guess I can only work on this at work when I skip lunch…

so if later on, someone askes me how long I took to complete the final version, I’ll tell them: “20 lunches!”

thanks for your comments and sorry I’m not posting too often.

Spacenail, I know you like post #14 better, but I though it was too static…

but overall do you guys feel it’s looking more dynamic now ?

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