Hey folks.Here is a quick test I did for an upcoming short,that a few peers and my self will be working on. vfx for this test are in the making as well.I will post that version later on. All critiques welcomed.
Mage test.
YashaP
#2
Hi alfamike88!
The poses in your animation look great! But the actions seem a tad slow and floaty. Try having quicker transitions and bigger ease outs.
-Yasha
alfamike88
#4
Hey Yasha, So in this updated I addressed your notes. I sped up timing on an over all level then again in the the charge, throw and spinning/attack sections. To correct the floaty feel I pushed and cleaned the break downs as well as favored them to the keys here and there to help the space. Please let me know what you think of these fix and if they can be improved more. I have been looking at this scene for a while now ,so I could use a pair of fresh eyes. Thanks again for all your help.
YashaP
#5
Looks heaps better! Continue to push it a bit more so hold the holds for longer and make the movement even quicker.
And the turn & punch at the end still feel very slow, try doing it over in around 12 frames or so.
keep up the great work.
-Yasha
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