Machineflesh 3D Challenge Entry: Reda J. Al-Yousef

#74

hi this is the start test…
I really didn’t like that much and will make some corrections

#75

I hope this will run smoothly for you now, Reda! It’s a nice concept, sort of D&D still, but with a splotchy twist :thumbsup:

#76

Great to see you started the modeling progress my friend! I have a small sugestion, looking at your last 2 concepts. Make them both wounds. and show smoke and mechanical parts in there.
What do you think?
:beer: :buttrock:

#77

Great suggestion angel thanx friend I will do it just that way
James thank you again
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#78

some other modifications

#79

ammmm more close

#80

Hi there Splotch…Well 1st Angel took my thoughts…And I would agree with him.I think this is coming along quite nicely.Nice definition,very imposing creature.My only thoughts to add now would be to consider making the feet and claws just a little bigger,more dangerous,imposing to match the rest of the body…Still a nice effort you got going here,I think this will be quite the creature,keep at it hard,looks promising.:thumbsup: :beer:

#81

I’ll second Virtuoso’s notes about the feet - needs to be big and fear-inducingly evil!

Great job this far.

#82

hey friend, nice start, cant wait to see more, besides the Virtuoso’s advice i have nothing smart to add, so i can only wish u luck man!:thumbsup:

#83

well, thanx guys rattlesnake, JamesMK, Virtuoso i will make the changes in the hand i guess you are right thanx again.
heheheq

#84

hhm, give him some hips, and shoulder in it… now the legs just come out of the body,

#85

flesh model before ading the mechanics

#86

hey mate, i really like the muscles youre modeling, thats a nice job, what are u planning for textures? ill be watching for more updates friend:bounce: :thumbsup:

#87

nice job… I like the way the character is fleshing out. Looking forward to seeing it develop…

#88

Nice update you got there splotch!!!
Really strange animal, I love it.
Keep it going!!!

:beer:

#89

wow agree with the other comments excellent update ! congratulations :thumbsup:
jdd

#90

rattlesnake,
thanx friend am planning to make an amphibians material with the mechanics I hope I can make it.

ajitmenon,
thank you dear am glad you like my work

EmpY,
thanx friend I will do my best … wish me good luck

jddog,
I will keep all comments in mind thank you friend.

#91

Hey, of course u can do whatever u want, good luck friend!! im waiting for your updates:wip:

#92

Looking good so far. Nice clean modelling and very close to the concept sketch.

I would hesitate to say though, that the creature could look a little more weighty perhaps? He kind of looks a bit too … um… upright? … kind of like a well behaved dog. I imagine a machine freak like it would be more feral and savage looking. I guess you can adjust it after you rig him up though. Anyway just thought I’d throw in my 2 cents for ya =)

Looking forward to seeing more and the adding of the machine parts.

#93

Hi splotch,

I see you’re in the modeling part. really nice.
You’re fellow modeling is very agressive, like you let us see in sketches you made.

Feet are still too little, i think.

:bounce: