Mathieu MAUVE has entered the Machineflesh 3D Challenge.
Machineflesh 3D Challenge Entry: Mathieu MAUVE
VelvetDragon
#3
Hello megavince !
Easy to speak when you don’t either have something to show yourself… 
Thanks for your patience. Now here is the background story of my charracter. Hope you like it ! 
There are things that may change in the character. So you can post your crits, comments and suggestions. They will be heard
The Stealth Assassin Angel
This takes place in a “not-so-far” future where science just begin to find a way to connect external non-organic parts to an animal brain. Opening the door to amazing means of extending human capabilities. Even if, officially, testing these research breakthroughs on human beings is prohibited and severely punished by law, some scientists don’t hesitate to risk their life making their awful experiences. Some of then don’t even hesitate to ruin one’s life…
She was born on Monday. Her mother gave her birth as they were on a flight to India, her ancestors’ land.
A birth full of blood. Her mother died this day.
Blood, blood again, blood always.
She grew up with her father in her country, magnificient India, where new technology and research reached a point never reached before in any other place in the world. Great towers of steel, endless highways and high tech modern-styled temples everywhere.
A life full of blood. Every friend she had were killed by strange men or disappeared with no hope of finding them. Her father - victim of a modern life so rude with honest people - was fooled into selling his own company. The result of a hard work that took all his life was sold for almost nothing. She never could make him smile again. He commited suicide by cutting his veins.
Blood, blood again, blood always.
She died on Tuesday. Without a family, her life was nothing more than rejection and misunderstanding from a world where there was no place for people like her. Homeless and hopeless, her life meant nothing anymore to her. She became a thief, and almost
A death full of blood. From the top of a building, she let herself fall down. She kept her eyes open while her body continued his way down, she faced her death, staring at it. The last thing she saw this day was her blood.
Blood, blood again, blood always.
She woke up on Wednesday. Opening her eyes, everything was blurry and white as snow. It could have been heaven if she wasn’t feeling so much pain running through her whole body. She heard a voice : “Hello Nisha, at last you’re awake”. How long did she stay here ? she couldn’t tell. She thought she was in a hospital, but she were wrong. This was a place full of scary beings, tortured souls inside bio-mechanoid bodies surrounded by scientists taking notes and videos of their “creations”. She was chosen from the very beginning of her life. Everything, from her birth to her suicide was planned by those men without heart, guided by their brain and their lust for wealth and power.
As she awoke, they asked her if she would like to serve them as a killer. Since she believed that her life was no more her property, she accepted. But she was planning something in silence. She just needed enough strength to do it. And they gave it to her…
They used her hate for mankind and all her pain to make a perfect killer, with cold blood. They taught her how to kill without being seen. Her body was prepared to receive implants and improvements even before her birth :
- electronic eyes to see multiple light spectrums and even in the darkness,
- great artificial ears that can detect ultrasounds, and articulated to cover a larger area,
- a machine-driven heart, more powerful, to feed the new muscles they added to her body,
- telescopic claws taking place at her fingertips controlled by new artificial muscles in her arms,
- articulated tail fixed down her spine, and connected to her nervous system featuring a digital camera at its end,
- even wings made of aluminium/carbon fiber alloy and with real great feathers(not sure of this at this point) all controlled by new connections to her brain, muscles added to her back and mechanical reinforcement to her vertebras.
They trained her to move quickly, to climb, to stay under water longer than any human. She improved her arms and legs muscles. Also, she had to learn how to fight with her claws and tail with a new style of combat based on known martial arts which are combined one with another.
She is now deadly, silent and powerful but no more human.
She has nothing to lose…
To be continued…
PS : Sorry for my bad english… I’m French.
fredconv
#4
bon moi en french voir meme en kreol koi !!
bon ben l histoire a l air pas trop mal héhéhé
mais oukilé le sketch? fait 1 mois k ou tran fé ti ou koué ? si lé aussi travaillé ke l histoire ca promet mais bon faut sorte a lu un jour kan meme 
enfin mi espere ou ca pas cal en rout !! LOL
allez velvet n atrouve pour la suite et comme je l ai deja dit ailleurs …
GOOUUUDDAAALLEUUUKKKKEEEEE !!! 
et vive la reunion nanèèèreuuuhh
VelvetDragon
#5
Thanks Nov@ !!!
Though I know some people here understand creole language, it would be fine for most users, that you guys reply in english.
Don’t worry, the sketch will come soon
I’m just trying to find good references to draw over.
I think I’ll make a sketch for one part at a time, then show the overall character with all improvements.
I want to use all the three months to make a good piece of art that I can be proud of. That’s why I entered this challenge.
So be patient guys…
Thx for your support
Nov@ : Good Luck for your entry in the 2D part !
See ya ! 
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