Machineflesh 3D Challenge Entry: Mark Endre Seljan


#141

before fixin’… I’m 185 tall with these shoes, she will be around the same, I think its enough, know it’s not the average height of women, but why not she’s a CG girlie. still workin on proportions…fixin’ is comin’ please be patient :slight_smile:


#142

Great work!
Keep going!
…and you`r right about proportions, keep working on it
Good luck!!!


#143

Man I really like the way you shaded the glass looking legs. It looks like you did it in max. Would you mind letting me know how you did that?


#144

hi tremo!

your drawings and concept sketches are really great. i think too many people in this business are underestimating the power of a pencil. your model is really good. especially the details and mechanic/bionic parts are awsome.

i wouldn’t worry about the height too much. she is artificial after all :slight_smile: or isn’t she?


#145

Hey Tremo what are you doing there with your cg girlie back to your work…haha… Yeah if the mech is o.k … proportions doesn’t matter…


#146

be careful with the left hand of your girl Tremoside looks so suspiciuos.

:thumbsup:


#147

These proportions are based on your comments, I’ve tried to find the middle way.

Yesterday my Doors Oper.System died, so I was busy. I’ve spent 10 hours with fightin against drivers and a vacuum cleaner:-) now…the machine is ready again.

hey adr…your fanatsy…is…

What you think about the new proportions?

cya mates!!!


#148

hi…

i’ve just entered the contest and just yet have had time to comment on other pieces by other artists. I can’t really comment on your design because in this late stage of your project. I always like to comment from the beginning of projects.

There is only one thing i’d like to say is. Be carefull of not to make the human more robot then human. If i look at the design now it looks like a robot with a human skin wrapped around it. The humen side need more attention now.

Btw, i really like the glass like leg…

Keep it up.

Dennis


#149

Thanks for answering my question man, i really appreciate it. I really have no problems with your model so i cant really criticize it. So keep on keeping on man. :thumbsup:


#150

Wow amazing progress :buttrock: once again I have to say that you style is really unique. In the overall view, the mix between machine and flesh is outstanding:thumbsup: I think the proportions look good now. Well i’ll stay tunned, keep updating. cya :beer:


#151

In a few words : the proportions are ok ! :buttrock:


#152

The flow of clothes on her body is looking realistic buddy…well done and yes your proportions are now more aesthetic…keep spinning…:beer:


#153

Hi, I think your work is very nice, but, there is a detail that I don’t like: her smile. Don’t you think is too ironic? Think about that pal… :slight_smile: you can give more.

Nishka


#154

Rock on mate! Is looking good!
:buttrock:


#155

Hi mates,

lavon2002:
I’m glad to hear. If am able to answer your questions I will try it always. Thank you:beer:

Deadly Force:
In a few words…:slight_smile: …thank you very much!

rajdeep:
Hi fellow, thanx. These clothes ar just symbols, I’m going to design something for her. by the way these are simple reactor cloths in max. Later Iwill apply some forces (like wind).
proportions are based on your (and others)comments I’m glad to hearing I’ve done it well.:beer:

mikepol |3D|:
Rock you too mate! Thanks for all of your suggestions!

now I have to work for school things…:cry: when will I sleep?

Ciao,
Tremo


#156

Nice improvements Tremoside! , thanks for coments in my thread :thumbsup:


#157

nice clothing tremo. but why is it so much? i mean it’s not winter or anything. let the girl breathe :smiley:


#158

tex started on head and hair…


#159

nna…here is the head with tex on.
as usual crits are welcome:-)

cya mates,

Tremo


#160

Hello Tremoside, The textures are starting to come along nice man , the hair need more work in the front and especially in the front.

Good work :beer: :thumbsup: