Machineflesh 3D Challenge Entry: Mark Endre Seljan

#121

wow it’s progressing well:thumbsup: nice curve in the design, really like it. You got a really interesting style keep it up mate :beer:

#122

hello man , the system in the knee seems to work perfect , nice update with legs and the knee together:buttrock:

Keep rocking:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

#123

wow, is impressive how u have working the mechanisms, thats a great work , im almost speechless, i cant miss this one!!:eek:

#124

Hi mates,

raxx:
Thank you, you’re so kind…:slight_smile: I hope cloth will not cover too much from these things, perhaps if I use a small costume. I will visit your page, see ya there.

mikepol |3D|:
:beer: man, I like your work, keep that style!!!

Cygnus_X:
Hey mate, thank you so… You’re one of the bests in this contest, these words from you are a mass of inspiration.

adr:
rock you too:buttrock:Thanks!

rattlesnake:
ohaaa, whatttt? speechless? hah thanks… it’s melting me.
:beer:

Now I try to find out how will thihg suspended to pelvis, maybe it’ gonna looks like as a corset belt…what you think? Perhaps there will be a side sliced mini-skirt. for keep the sexy look.

Thank you again mates,
Tremo

#125

Hi Tremoside,

I’ve found this thread very late, but not to late;)

Great modelling, great look.
…and the main thing for me is that it looks really functional. You think about the physics and mechanics and this is the most impressive thing…:applause: :bowdown:

Big respect goes out to u:beer:

#126

:beer:
Great Great Tremoside !!!
Your woman who is arriving will be like a jewell :D, i like a lot your design, the update you have done with the legs and technicals explanations are wonderfull ! Amazing Design stuff you’re doing !
I’m hudge fan !
Best congrats !
Keep it higher & higher !!

#127

Hi men,

Saschi0815:
wowa, great thanks to you mate!

harnelbe:
Thx, I’m on it. Design equipments for huma:buttrock:

UPDATE will comin’!

soon…till that you can add here all your comments

see ya:wavey:

#128

before next steps…some check about proportions, crits are welcome!!!

hello,
Tremo

#129

Hello Mark , the last update is awesome man , the lady looks so sexy , great work . We want to see more .

Can you put a hires img to see the details ?

:beer:

#130

Adr:
Thanks for your words. you know this figure is not ready, and I modified some of the proportions on the main figure, like height and other things. This is why I have to remodel some parts on the body. now before i fix this problem with details i want to be sure (of course it’s not possible:-) about main proportions like bodyheight, thicknesses and all these kind. This smaller preview is a guide for me (or for you if you want to help me) to keep eyes on main problems and after this on details.

:beer: :beer:

#131

Very Beautifull Work…how did i miss this …congrats man!!!

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

#132

Great update friend!
Keep on modeling!
Promoitios looks fine to me!
:thumbsup:

#133

Very impressive! The only thing bugging me is her breasts. Somehow they look artificial, like she’s got silicon implants or something like that. Give them a more natural slope and roundness and I think she will look just perfect. :thumbsup:

/Anders

#134

Fantastic model !:buttrock:

Maybe two details should be adjusted :

Like Cartesius said the breast looks artificial.
And more important, to my mind the head is too small.

I think that 8 times the size of the head in the height of the whole body is a maximum.
:wise:

#135

Problems I see:
Legs: must be closer. Head proportions with the rest of the body doesn’t fit. Breasts are strange. Waist is too thin.
I felt all these before checking any reference…

#136

Awesome work buddy it’s killing spree…Just one note to make the side view of your model suggest it’s C.G. to be off the vertical axis what i mean is your sholders or upper body can move a bit back…Just about pose… and yeah about proportions …it depends upon the size of the mechs, you can scale it to bring it back to proportions or can keep it as such if the mech parts are o.k

#137

Thank you:bowdown: ,

So, here is a summary about suggestions:

1: breasts are not naturalistic

2: bodyheight doesn’t fit
-mosconariz: you’re right, I know these things (pictures and standard proportions), but because this character doesn’t want to be very- very realistic it wasn’t a disturbing fact for me. In this case she has a seriously rebuilted body, this can offer some new possilbilities like longer legs as I made or others… in my head this mechs are not just for replacing normal bodyparts, by the way I will keep eyes on it. shoes are high heel (10cm) too…

3: waist is too thin

Thank you for comments, these are great help for me :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

I try to send fixed images tomorrow afternoon…

#138

thats a nice update, i think to look af all together is great!, about proportions… shes a bit larger than standard human proportions, but i find this interesting , she looks with style! i dont find disturbing that, but maybe u want to make some tweaking there as mosconariz suggested… is up to you, the mechanic implements and integration is amazing… u have great ideas and youre doing an impressive work man… so keep this way!

:beer:

ooh and artificial breast?.. isnt that machineflesh?, those can be bionic implants…:smiley:

#139

Originally posted by rattlesnake
ooh and artificial breast?.. isnt that machineflesh?, those can be bionic implants…:smiley:

LOL! The same thought hit me when I had posted the suggestion! Oh well… :slight_smile:

/Anders

#140

haha!!

naturalistic contra bionic implants

I’m on the imlant’s side, it’s a machineflesh challenge, by the way they will be covered with cloth…